Reviews for Visitors of the Darkness
AsadLittleMuss chapter 1 . 8/8/2013
omg i loved it!
Nychta chapter 1 . 9/10/2011
sequel?

i mean what would happen if deidara started dating . . . oh, I don't know, Itachi, what would happen.

Would mr. ghost-sasori-danna flip out? kill itachi? confront dei?

Good, god, I have so many ideas!

On anther note, i really like your writing style. it flows, even with flashbacks, which are usually awkward and jerky, memories too big to fit into a moment. yet you manage to sum it up in a word or two.

good job!
kariuchiha19 chapter 1 . 5/11/2010
this was gud!i lik how u made d whole ghost thin. it had a very ud plot!
xXSakina28Xx chapter 1 . 12/31/2008
OMG! I just LOVED it! So full of emotions, though i wish Dei-kun would have really felt that way for Sasori. T~T Anyway, it just kept me reading more and more! This is really good for your first Naruto yaoi fanfic! SasoDei 4EVA! /
YaoiRocks chapter 1 . 6/18/2008
That was sweet and hawt~ X3 I loved it~

You have talent my dear~ I haven't put something on my favs in a while xD

You kept the characters IC which I like~ I don't like stories that make the characters to OC. Its just to...unrealistic. Your spelling and grammar are good so there isn't much to say in the way of criticism. The level of detail was good for what you were writing so thats not really a problem. The plot was good as well. This was a good piece of writing.

Keep up the good work~

~YaoiRocks~

~Peace out and Yaoi for all~
the-sirens-song chapter 1 . 6/14/2008
You are talented my dear. I don't think I have ever cried and have had a nosebleed at the same time. Love the way it's written.

~Akarein
dongz-sempai95 chapter 1 . 5/20/2008
real cute and sad at the same time
mayflyDecember chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Sqwe! *favorite* I like it. 3 Especially the ending.

Keep writing!

I ever remain your obedient reader, Emily, the Slytherin Princess
Midnight Ninja Kat chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
i really liked it the plot was well put together! keep up the good work!

~Midnight Ninja Kat~
Devilis Kyuu chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Cute! Well, you did very good on your first yaoi!
BomberBrat chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aw, that was cute! it made me all...female, lol.

Anyways I loved it _

Keep up the good work hun!