Reviews for May the Best Date Win
ChieriAn9eL chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Ooh I love your story! Their dilaogue is so very Edward and Bella... hahah... "Bella, this isn't the Nobel Peace Prize we're talking about...it's a dating contest. I don't think spending the rest of your existence as a vampire really qualifies as proper compensation." I'm glad you're writing this because people rarely write about this wonderful summer in between Twilight and New Moon.
hotflower06 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Great story!

Update soon

It's a unique plot

I always wanted to know what happened that summer

Now go and make Stephenie Meyer proud!
B.Mikaelson chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
This should get interesting. Update soon please. I can't wait to see what Edward has planned. _
PuppyBekaCooper chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
LOL! i FREAKING love it!

~Liz
qjmom chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Great start momof5! I love when TMs have new stories!

Since shabbyapple got you to read PF, I return the favor.

I can't wait to see what Edward can come up with for a date! I have to believe he will do a better job...he is SO romantic afterall!

Also, laughed outloud at the spitting in her hand! Very funny!
doreansmomma chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
I really like the idea of reading a story about the summer that Edward & Bella had together before her 18th birthday! Great! This story is onto a sound start and I'm looking forward to your updates soon!
nielanut chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
very cute!
Howardgirls2003 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
That's so cute! I love the finger kissing, it's so sweet!
blondie AKA robin chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Very well written! You've done a great job portraying Edward and Bella, I can't wait to see where you take us next.

Great grammar, very descriptive. Not a typical first fanfic!

blondie
TwilightAngel08 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
o! really great chapter! can't wait to read more, so please update soon!
sweetishbubble chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
My beta wrote her own story!

I love it!
AshFF chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
IT WAS REALLY GOOD!
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