|Reviews for CONCUSSIONS, CAKE, AND COUPONS|
| Tididooo chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Awesome! it was funny and beautiful at the same time. great work!
| ziggy.uk chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Brilliant story Vanessa! Just loved how Dean made such an effort to give his little brother a special birthday, especially as he was stuck in a hospital bed injured and with concussion!
The coupons were hysterical, Sam will obviously pick his moments to collect on them - laughed at the thought of Sam taking an injured Dean to hospital without him protesting!
Superb ending Dean performing a helium Dad theatre for Sam and great that it just brought good memories for Dean not pain! The sound of the boys laughter coming from the room was something both boys desperately needed and in their line of work don't get a lot of!
Superb writing Vanessa, hope you have more stories in the pipeline!
| sweetysmart0505 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
That was an awesome awesome fiction! Great job on this!
| sylia91 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
OMG! The birthday coupons and Helium Dad Theatre! Just the right mix of humor, heart and brotherly schmoop! Loved this!
| carocali chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Very nice moment in the Winchester life! Sometimes the simplist things are the best and gifts from the heart are always way better than expensive crap. The coupons were fantastic!
Thanks for sharing!
| TraSan chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aw, heart happy story!
Thanks for the smile and the brotherly bonding. :D
Great little story.
| Thru Terry's Eyes chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
That was cute and sweet. I liked it.
| beyondtired chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
That was a more than aw-worthy story. Loved it!
| friendly chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
nice job.. that was really good..
| Thorny Hedge chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
This was simply wonderful.
| bb1028 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Aww very cute! Loved all of it, but the end was great :)
| vonnie836 chapter 1 . 5/2/2008
Awesome story, so funny but also really touching. The way Dean is trying to give a great birthday to injured Sam, really great. Love the coupons. You really got Dean right on. I can see him doing something like that. And in the end I just laughed a lot, because I pictured Dean waiting to find out if Sam was going to laugh until he hiccuped or peed his pants. Thanks for putting this up for Sam's Birthday. Hugs, Vonnie