Reviews for Perfect Espionage
msylcatac9 chapter 1 . 8/20/2009
I thought the story was pretty well-written. I hope to see more!
pdmorris chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Hey, it's brian2040 from the TOL. It's been a long time since I played PD, but I have to say that this is pretty good. You've gotten better with the sentences, but you still use a lot of simple ones, use more commas etc. Nothing more to say about that. Now you should post your Zelda one.