Reviews for 50 Sentences
soshi185 chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
Great job. I love this couple, your fanfic is really fantastic!
LuminiaAravis chapter 1 . 11/25/2009
Easy and simple. I liked it! Kind of a different perspective on things, eh?
Akabane Girl chapter 1 . 8/7/2009
Great. It was simply great. Mello, Halle and Matt are very IC and every sentence draws a picture that matches well with their characters. Great job !
young dawn chapter 1 . 7/25/2009
I loved it; I think you really got Halle/Mello down. :) Just superb the way you interpreted their relationship, and I loved the random Matt refs. xD My favorites were cold, promises, care, friends, sin, and dance.
AkariLucero chapter 1 . 3/16/2009
Squee! There needs to be more Halle/Mello stories out there. It's such a taboo couple in Death Note. I absolutely love the couples nobody supports in this fandom though. :D

Good job with capturing each theme perfectly! I enjoyed reading it!
BuffoonPrincess chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I really liked it!

kisses,

hikaru!
spinx chapter 1 . 6/17/2008
Damn it!

Who the hell would have thought that 50 sentences could be that good?

That this "story" wont get you that many reviews you will know yourself. But that doesnt mean that its not a really cool piece.

I can honestly tell you that your 50 sentences have touched the core of Hal/Mello more than many other "long" stories have.

And hardly any of those other stories left me thinking or wondering about them. For every sentence, there was one picture in my head. Simply amazing.

So far Ive only ever read two other stories about Halle and Mello which had managed to do the same.

So I can really hope that you will write more about them- youve certainly got the groove!

(Thanks for the nice read)
Bishounenchaser chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
This was nice. There are not enough Hallo out there so this was a excellent addition to it. Good work.
Isabel M-Ameban chapter 1 . 5/3/2008
Very nice story. You portrayed their relatinship in short sentencies very neatly.

I also like the "anti-fangrl" part XD