|Reviews for Intrusive Dusk|
| courierNews chapter 25 . 8/12/2009
oh twinses! :dance: Yay, Catherine & 'Lexsai! D
Beautiful ending, Aurora! :clap:
| SpeedDemon315 chapter 25 . 8/9/2009
*erupts into a dance of joy which is soon followed by a seizure of happiness* Okay, what new way can I say to you how much this chapter pwned? Well, for starters, it rocked my socks! And...wait for it...
IT WAS SUPER-SPECIAL AWESOME, SMACK-DOWN, TWO-THUMBS UP FANSTASTIC! (And let's toss in the some German!) Es war Spitze und ausgezeihnet! (It was great and excellent!)
Wow, you certainly came along way with this story, I certainly enjoyed it through each and everyone chapter. It's so cute Alexsei and Catherine have twins-and girls too! The very opposite of what Alanatos had. Something tells me that these two sets of twins are going to meet and sqaure off in Hyrbrid Dawn: The Twins of Light vs the Twins of Darkness. Or "Good Girls Meet the Bad Boys" because Adrain and Arkadi are going to total, awesome badasses, right?
So I will await the thrid enstallment and look forward to your other projects (I'm stilling wondering about that POTO fanfic you had in mind). Take care and keep on writing!
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 17 . 8/2/2009
Review of Chapter 17: Go Alexandra! The part about Alana's boots kind of ruined the moment though. )
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 16 . 8/2/2009
Review of Chapter 16: I'M CONFUZZLED! So Van Helsing and Serius slept with Alana. If Van Helsing is still just a little werewolf, how do we know who Nickelia's father is? Didn't Alana tell Van Helsing she was pregnant with his child? *Head spirals*
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 15 . 8/2/2009
Review of Chapter 15: I'm more than half way there!
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 14 . 8/1/2009
Review of chapter 14: Jacob? Edward? Plese tell me you were short on names. Let's just say, with me, if I want vampires and werewolves, I go Van Helsing. NOTHING witten by a certain author *cough* Stephnaie Meyer *cough*
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 13 . 8/1/2009
Review of chapter 13: Checked out both the songs on YouTube, loved them. You have very clever musical taste.
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 12 . 8/1/2009
Review of Chapter 12: Review. I don't know what else to come up with so... CHEESECAKE! was that a good review?
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 11 . 8/1/2009
Review of Chapter 11: Reviewing again to make a happy Rora. Poor Alexei. All this was happening and only his muse knew.
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 10 . 8/1/2009
Review of Chapter 10: I like Akyra. She just has the bad girl going sweet humor about her. Fences is also an awesome song.
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 9 . 8/1/2009
Review of Chapter 9: I'm back and awake. Love the tension building up between characters. Can you have some of your friends take my poll, please?
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 8 . 7/31/2009
Review or Chapter... I'm falling asleep. I don't remember. Same thing. Incredible, phenominal, brilliant, all those good fun adjective that I can't spell at this hour of the night. I'll read more tomorrow. Keep *Heeves over. reaches up hand to keyboard* Writing. Don't... *Inhales sharply* go anywhere. *passes out from exhaustion.*
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 7 . 7/31/2009
Review of Chapter 7: It's 11:51pm right now. I was gonna go to bed, but guess what? Your bloody suspensfull ending of a chapter is gonna keep me up all night!
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 6 . 7/31/2009
Review of chapter 6: Again, what can I say? It was amazing. Loved the twist. The post chat, spectacular. How many chapters are left? I'm going to start running out of adjectives.
| TeyrianTimelord chapter 5 . 7/31/2009
Review of chapter 5: Linkin Park, shadow of the day. Good song. Just wanted to say, I ADORED the post character conversation in this one.