|Reviews for Shepard Betrayed|
| Parle chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
It doesn't sound too bad so far. Sadly, the story is incredibly short. Although, don't let my review deter you from continuing because I do love Toombs in the game, and I hope you DO continue. I'm encouraging you to keep writing and write what is going on with Kyle Shepard's past. Just try and write a lot okay? This chapter is equivalent to ONE tiny M&M candy, when a reader can actually eat a whole bag.