|Reviews for Love Last Longer than ForeverON HIATUS!|
| CullenCovenGirl88 chapter 2 . 11/5/2009
aw. This has a VERY cool plot and i gotta see whats gonna happen! It isnt possible for her to REALLY be Clara since bella blushes. *sigh* I must know
| whitezcar chapter 2 . 3/9/2009
:) I love it! please update soon! By the way, if you need a beta for this or any other story, I would be more than happy to help!
| LostInEdwardsEyes chapter 2 . 12/21/2008
Love, love, LOVE this story!
You have to continue it! I know I will keep reading if you keep writing!
| Jennmc75 chapter 2 . 8/7/2008
I don't know if you are going to continue this story, but I have really enjoyed these two chapters. If you update, I will definitely be reading.
| animelove454 chapter 2 . 7/10/2008
thats not fair come on
please keep writing
| MAEC92105 chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
Amazing. I decided to read it cause well I dont have to tell you how much I love Loathing my Devotion:-D. This story is just WOW...I love it...and would really really like you to keep updating it as well! You are an amazing writer as well!
| Sophie Girl chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
OMG! You have to keep going! What a great twist!
| vnfan chapter 2 . 6/11/2008
This is a really solid start and an interesting premise! I hope you get enough reviews to make it worth while for you to continue.
| roughdraft525 chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
Okay so I take back what I said after Chapter 1... I really like how you're working the Twilight events. It feels nothing like the carbon copy a lot of authors try to use (though I never even thought you might do that, you're way too talented). When reading it, I totally sense that it's a new story, not just a reworking. I can't wait to see where it goes! I really hope you start updating it again :)
| roughdraft525 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
Okay, so chapter one is definitely well written. And the concept is a bit different which is exciting... I only worry about how close the events in present day will follow Twilight... a lot of the time it gets kind of boring reading the same plot with small twists on it. I mean, rereading the books is something I love, but gentle reworkings of the events can be a bit tiring for me. But of course, it's completely up to you, and I haven't even gotten to Bella yet... just sharin my thoguhts with you. I definitely think this is a story worth continuing.
| DatBengaliFinesse chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
im so impressed again lol
i love stories like this
n yet ive only readl like..2
this by far is definitely the best tho
i look forward to an imeediate update ;P
PLEASE dont let him take to long!
| DatBengaliFinesse chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
i LOVE this already!
u DEfINITELY MUST KEEP THIS GOING!
its so...immaculately written i cant get over it!
okay srry to cut this short but i really must read the next chap b4 i go off to sleep!
| truehazel chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
Yes! An amazing story, I believe. This sounds really good, as you can tell I'm excited. Is Bella reincarnated? Or is she a descendent? Would that be a little creepy, if she was a descendent? Will Edward ever tell Bella that she reminds him of Clara? Would that make Bella feel Edward just loves the past not her? I don't know, I guess I'm excited and have questions comin' out the yin yang. Please, for my sanity update soon. :D
BTW, I love love love Loathing My Devotion.
| dietmountainlion123 chapter 2 . 6/10/2008
so is clara bella's great great grandma...hm
im confused. good story
| dietmountainlion123 chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
I don't get it. So Clara is Bella?