|Reviews for Reaht|
| DataTwoHearts chapter 1 . 11/27/2008
As a critique:
Your summery did your story no justice. The storyline was seemed somewhat familiar but from where I have read it before, I have no clue. The paragraph structure was quiet good for amateur writer, much better then some of the writers here on . The characters, though, where lacking... authenticity. There isn't much you can do for that. Putting the original creator's personal touch into the character is something you can either do or cant. It isn't something you can change. But don't worry, it really isn't noticeable to regular readers. I just have a great English teacher who is also an Otaku who has taught me the difference! You seem to be able to keep your reader – or at least me – interested throughout the entire story. I didn't skip to the end to see what happened and thats amazing!
I would LOVE to see more of this story.
You're a great writer and there certainly isn't enough Megatokyo fanfictions on this site!
So, I'll be checking in on you to see what happens!
Cant wait for more!
| Aviantei chapter 1 . 8/7/2008
i like your style of writing, you bring out a different side to characters. i hope you add on to this.:)