Reviews for Party With The Mabudachi Trio!
Pheonix09 chapter 2 . 6/19/2014
Nice job on this but it was kinda short, write more please

I vote for Hatori and Ayame (Aya uke)
Sarabi chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
Hatori x Ayame
MiyuCross12 chapter 2 . 5/28/2011
i loved it! as for my vote i want Ayame X Hatori please!
Nitrea chapter 2 . 12/1/2009
What! The! CRAP! ARE YOU SEROUS! THAT WAS SO CREEPY! Loved the story!

-Love Nitrea ;)
Seliphra chapter 1 . 4/8/2009
lmao, poor Hari, gonna regret going drinking...unless they always get like that...;;

At anyrate, the Mabudachi Trio always were suspiciously close behind the scenes...too much so for it to be just Shigure and Ayame doing each other...Hatori had to be gettin' some too...and your fic fills in many blanks, lol
MysticSorceror chapter 2 . 5/4/2008
I vote for HatorixAyame since the couple interests me

Things I liked:

Poor Ha'ri

I like how Shigure played with his words

I love the human anatomy idea

Ways to improve:

Spelling issues

Work on characterization a little more

Pretty funny


Warning: Only read the next part if you can handle brutal honesty


Things I didn't like:

I don't think that Hatori would ever hand Shigure ammunition but instead would threaten him

A bit short
MysticSorceror chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Things I liked:

Lol nice beginning - somehow it makes me laugh

I can kind of see why Hatori doesn't usually get drunk _


Ways to improve:

Maybe describe the dancing a little more

Although they are drunk I think the characterization could use a little more work

Kinda weird but I like it


Warning: I tend to be brutally honest on the next part



Things I didn't like:

It's a bit random in places

It's a bit too crazy maybe add some more development in places