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Minato cheated on Kushina?

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this story is unbelievably slow. it took half of the chapters to even step FOOT into konoha, and even with jiraiya and tsunade with him, he is still weak? in canon, he managed to cut a leaf WAY earlier than what he could do. it’s extremely boring and i actually can’t believe i’ve sat there and made it this far into the damn story. glad you stopped writing this book.

What is with this totally bogus weakness. If you are going to nerf him do it in a believable way.

ESTOU SURTANDO! A Tsunade e o Minato vão ter um bebê, ela deixou de ser vovó-Tsunade para ser mamãe Tsunade que loco nano! Ele deixou de ser o filho dela para ser O PAI DO FILHO DELA, EU BOGUEI GERAL, SURTEI.

I wish this story was longer as it just got to the good part.

this chapter was funny.

seriously? he still can't cut a leaf in half? he learned how to do that in a few days in the anime. this Naruto should be smarter and more talented and the fact that he's been learning for a year and still hasn't done it is ridiculous

I hope its not one of those novels where Naruto gets the curse seal even though it literally wouldn't work on him.

jiraya was one of the most idealistic ninjas in the show. I can't see him wanting to beat the idealism out of Naruto. the guy wanted peace so badly.

didn't Orochimaru leave the Akatsuki earlier than this? he left shortly after Itachi joined.

poor shizune.

how is he gonna be a shinobi when he has two chakras that don’t mix well?

fox is a damned pain in the ass since it’s written to mix horribly with the mokuton chakra. Should completely seal the shit away.