Reviews for Senju Naruto |
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![]() ![]() ...holy shit... |
![]() ![]() ![]() still being read by people in 2020. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Boy do I miss this fanfic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please update this is a great story |
![]() ![]() ![]() OH MY GOD I HATE DANZO SO MUCH FJAKSLJGELKGHEIN IT MAKES ME SO ANGRY kfenwlqkvnklvneiwog4huoiua- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lol. Tsunade's gonna lose. Naru is too stubborn and lucky to not get things down. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww... Naru is so precious! :3 |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, omg. Kushina's still alive! O.O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I have one question, why does Naruto have the whisker marks? he only got them in canon because of Kushina being the jinchuriki before him. |
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![]() ![]() The story is enjoyable so far. However I do have a couple of questions and comments. My first question as I’m reading this is how come you did not have Jeriah teach Naruto ceiling as he was growing up? And how come he only knows a couple of water jujitsu and a couple of earth jujitsu? Jeriah Jeriah if I remember correctly is fire and earth nature so how come he has a tight him any of those do so yet? In addition other than weapons how come Naruto isn’t caring around poisonous? And will Cascina Will Cascina ever find out that Naruto is metal son? And will you ever update? I’ve read this story three times already and nothing has been updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Why does this always happen can we PLEASE get a fanfic where naruto doesn't want to be hokage I mean it's great that he has a goal but fuuuuuuck does it always have to be a hokage? 97.89% of naruto fanfics always have him trying to be hokage it's fucking annoying... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Please don't be a fanfic where naruto wants to become hokage... I mean if I wanted that I'd watch the actual show instead |
![]() ![]() ![]() A decade later and this is still the best story with this premise in my mind. Something that was slow burn and it was absolutely earned. And you kept going, I have no doubt that she would’ve done justice whatever path that you decide to go with in regard to the story progression. TreeBoy Naruto stories have become so over done, it’s become sickening to see them. And they can be thrown in the same giant pile of garbage written stories that are RedEye Naruto. However, this being one of the first stories to try this premise, it’s really one of the very few that did it justice. From a writing standpoint and an interest standpoint Even if you didn’t get too far in the main story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its nice to come back and read this story every couple of years and it still be one of the best on the site. |