Reviews for Pokemon: Zane
Novak chapter 2 . 5/14/2008
i did hav time, fancy that lol, i like the new chapter, keep writing, bring on the next one
Novak chapter 1 . 5/14/2008
this is sweet so far, havnt got time 2 read it all will do later,
darkstarj13 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Not a bad start. I'm interested to see more
mramirez1991 chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Nice story little bro. Although it could have been longer. I see you're using the ideas I gave you. lol you used Maya's name, but not ours. I found it funny that you changed my name to Jason. I like how you kept the age relations like they really are between you, me, and maya.