|Reviews for Revenge|
| Naruto Uchiha chapter 15 . 3/5/2013
Not bad dude. I have to accept the fact that you are pretty good in making fanfictions.
| ItachiNaruto chapter 6 . 2/28/2013
I liked this story...up until it turned into a Sakura bashing fest. Whether or not Sakura was "deceptive" Sasuke should still pay and not be forgiven so easily. This is certainly NOT all Sakura's fault. After all, Sasuke is the one who is supposed to be in a committed relationship with Naruto, not Sakura. Why would he just believe her without any confrontation whatsoever to the accused party?
Furthermore, Naruto is hardly a selfish kind of character, so for him to be accused of doing something so ooc for him should have been met with suspicion and immediate confrontation. It's like someone who never lies getting caught in a lie. I can take Sakura bashing if it's done right, but I feel like this is just going to turn into an all out hate fest on her and putting the blame on her while forgiving Sasuke's shortcomings, which really isn't fair.
He is supposed to love Naruto, therefore trust him and not hurt him the way he did. Regardless of Sakura's betrayal, it was SASUKE indeed who did the overall betraying and he should have his equal just deserts, not just Sakura. I hope at the very least this ends in ItaNaru because Sasuke does not deserve Naruto's forgiveness. Neither does Sakura for that matter. (even though I think she is EXTREMELY out of character in this story and I wish I had been warned previously of extreme bashing on her person.)
| kirara the great chapter 15 . 2/23/2013
wtf no iwant more of this or have you stopped writing on this story
| kirara the great chapter 7 . 2/23/2013
he should be with itachi
| Kira The Dead Ninja chapter 7 . 8/6/2011
Please don't delete this! IT IS BRILLIANT!
| DawnthePurpleBunny chapter 15 . 7/19/2011
I want you to finish! Please?
| yaoihaven chapter 15 . 6/21/2011
NOOOOOOOO PLZZ dont take away revenge i mean i love this fic i mean, its one of my fav's one where i just fell in love with i guess anyways its your decision ur the best writer i have stumbled upon and let me say, iv read quite a few of ur story's and love them all ur the best author i have ever seen, anyways i just wanna say at least make one last chappie or whatever or OMG if u rewrite this id love to like ehmmm review multiple times xD, im strange annnyways yea uhhm id love to see the rewrite cuz i noticed u were sayign u wanted to rewrite it...so yeeeeeeea
| Evil E. Evil chapter 15 . 12/16/2010
| KitsuneDango chapter 15 . 10/6/2010
awwwwwww i thought it was fine it was fun but i did want more itanaru action
| SteadyDecline chapter 15 . 9/6/2010
omg i love this story i read it months ag oand then i forgot to favourite... i was like NOOOO but anyways i found it again and hooray i love the story... it was a good plot with sakura lying and being a whore lol.. but sasuke got played cause he is hell bent on revenge.. i think u portrayed the characters excellently and seriously this story is awesome. :D
| Gaanarulurver chapter 7 . 8/29/2010
GO TO THE NINTH DEPTHS OF HELL YOU MONSTER torturing poor naru-chan like taht hmmph
| yuukiluna chapter 15 . 5/5/2010
thank u for not killing naruto
| PotionsPet chapter 15 . 5/1/2010
Both of these fics are on my watchlist, so I'm a lil bummed but re-writes would be awesome! If you don't like your past work and want to re-work it then, why not? I can't wait to see what you may come up with!
I you decide to adopt them out then, I hope you find great people to take them over._
| Narutoluvr9 chapter 15 . 4/28/2010
Please rewrite this story! i dont want it to be gone forever!
| FoxyKit22 chapter 15 . 4/27/2010
Great job with the story so far. I definitely think that you should continue. I don't think your chapters are crappy at all, especially compared to some writers on this site.
I really wish there was a way that Naruto could have both Sasuke and Itachi. You set up the story perfectly for that to happen, but obviously not going to do that because how blantant you made Naruto get over Sasuke.
I think that if you decide to go back and re-write the story, you should seriously consider the possibility of Sasuke and Itachi sharing Naruto. First, you can see how much the two brothers love Naruto. Both, in their own way, deserve the same love in return. Second, Sasuke even though he did cheat, as you wrote he was manipulated into it, and feels utmost remorse, even though like you said that's not his style. Plus you kinda gave him the short stick- he pretty much gets screwed all the way around, especially since he didn't even like Sakura or anything and was picturing Naruto the entire time. And Thirdly, I think it would make for a fun story seeing how the two brothers fight over Naruto the entire time and both think they know what is best for him. It would certainly add a touch of humor to the otherwise angsty story.
Either way, I definitely think that you should continue. I hope you get your muse back, and school and work stop kicking your ass! Good luck!