Reviews for The Omega Chronicles: Rise of the Red Rebellion
Sonanoka21093 chapter 30 . 2/25/2014
Is... the strange way you keep on saying attacks the norm now...? At first it was kind of silly, but now it just keeps on bringing me out of the moment, and is kind of annoying... All these incorrect spellings to make it sound like someone Japanese is yelling it or something, that is. Does this... continue on into all of the chapters from this point on...? I'm starting to miss the old way...
Sonanoka21093 chapter 29 . 2/24/2014
Crap, I never reviewed last night, and now it's no-longer fresh in my mind! Uhh... I enjoyed that chapter; the ending was actually surprising, what with the shadow guy making an entrance. Reset the world, evil dude!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 28 . 2/24/2014
Well, that happened. I wonder if Omega will ever get his meal? Virus cores are part of a balanced breakfast after all. We can't have him skip that meal! Ohh well, I'm sure that it happened off screen. Anyways, that was the best way to bring a commissar into the picture. And I'll have the agree that commissars are quite badass, just as the colonel is. Great finale to a great fight!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 27 . 2/23/2014
What the... hell. It's not going to give me nightmares, but daaaaamn, that's like the size of Leviathan, isn't it? That monster is... huge!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 26 . 2/23/2014
Is it strange that, at first, I totally thought that Queenbee would be out of the fights in the FFA? She's... certainly stronger than I expected, being able to copy Omega's attack like that. A match made in heaven! I look forward to what the future brings us of Omega and Queenbee! She is certainly pulling her weight, and I quite like her outfit, so everything is good. You've certainly succeeded at making me like her! Good job!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 25 . 2/22/2014
Saw this megamerge coming a mile away! Model O, vehicle! It's kind of funny, really. I wonder if other biometals could pull that off if they tried? A Zero or X bike would be pretty cool! But not as cool as an Omega bike or car. Omega is awesome.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 24 . 2/22/2014
Wow, that's a seriously... magnetic personality that those two have! Sorry. Bad joke. Nothing else to say this time. I'm surprised at how well you wrote combat on wheels. I expected you to have trouble! Not the easiest change, really.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 23 . 2/22/2014
Ohh freaking hell yes, you know what Kinetika is! That's one of my favorite racing games of all time! I always loved the way that game worked. It made no sense, but that was part of the charm. I wish that it had a sequel...
Sonanoka21093 chapter 22 . 2/22/2014
Bike smash puny Omega! That out of my system, I'm quite liking the way that this chapter turned out! Poor Vesper sisters... Crying get interrupted by Omega, and he makes it look like he's turning down the challenge. Of course not! Send Celtis to do it! Celtis doesn't mind! You know, now that I think about it, how do you pronounce her name? I've been going with keltihs.
Sonanoka21093 chapter 21 . 2/22/2014
Ahh, is W Weil? That one didn't even come across for me! So we have Saber(female) in a sword, huh? It's gonna be interesting to see just how she works! I mean, she won't have a huge hunger, right? ...Or was that part of the swords skills, letting him eat that virus core?
Sonanoka21093 chapter 20 . 2/21/2014
So if A is Axl, Z is Zero, and X is... X... who the heck is W? I'm drawing a blank on names starting with that letter other than Willie or whatever his name was. And... Omega just recharged Pandora like it was nothing! And jeez, Model O sure is a pain, huh?
Sonanoka21093 chapter 19 . 2/21/2014
Well, looks like Mister Lightning Bullet's attack is being used to great effect! I had been wondering just how that would be used, and I was far from disappointed! And so the voices in her head begin... This shall be quite interesting. And... wow. So Omega now has Excalibur. Jeez...
Sonanoka21093 chapter 18 . 2/21/2014
Well, that was certainly interesting! Poor Queenbee! You successfully captured the darkness of all of that, I believe. And trust me, I know dark universes pretty well - I enjoy Warhammer 40k and a certain Changeling/Touhou crossover - this story could easily be darker. And... I wouldn't mind in the least! I love dark things! Seeing you go dark on us is simply pleasant to me!
Sonanoka21093 chapter 17 . 2/21/2014
Ohh god, I'm tearing up at just how awesome this one is! A guy who can teleport and transfer things with pinpoint accuracy, as though with a gate of Babylon with the sheer numbers... Amazing! Poor Queen Bee... She didn't deserve that at all, did she? Poor thing... Make him pay for his crimes, Celtis! Then Omega will get to deal with him later, and really lay it on him! Ohh, I'm looking forward to that...
Sonanoka21093 chapter 16 . 2/21/2014
That was quite awesome! It was too bad that you didn't actually write out the battle! You have some of the best battles, and just by seeing the more lasting portions of what happened, I know that it had to have been epic. And then we have Omega's parts! God were those funny. 'Nuff said.
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