Reviews for Castles In the Sand
kawaiilileevee chapter 7 . 11/24/2012
Aww... at least Red and Lance have each other. Their job sounds like it sucks!
kawaiilileevee chapter 6 . 11/24/2012
Poor Lorelei! I bet she's sick of people ogling her boobs... because she does have huge boobs in the Pokemon anime. Even Misty stares at her boobs!
kawaiilileevee chapter 5 . 11/24/2012
I bet professor Oak would be envious, though, since the Pokedex keeps getting better in all the Pokemon games. The anime seems constant...
kawaiilileevee chapter 4 . 11/24/2012
Lance is a girl! And she's still Dragon Master and amazing and she takes care of Red... good care of Red...
kawaiilileevee chapter 3 . 11/24/2012
It is creepier not knowing how Lance wound up so broken. At least Red can take care of her... if he's not as crazy as she is... and while silversteel wings make her pretty, I'm sure this is not how she wanted to get them!
kawaiilileevee chapter 2 . 11/24/2012
...That is kind of creepy, with Red being addicted to his cum...
kawaiilileevee chapter 1 . 11/24/2012
I know! Who stole the Master Ball specs? And I'm sure that this is a good model for how businessmen really act in the real world...
crosswire chapter 1 . 6/2/2009
Yours Truly Serendipity chapter 7 . 6/6/2008
Wow...that was a great twist..Great JOB!
Lixie Lorn chapter 7 . 6/4/2008
I got the human coliseum right!

Which is scary as it's human training in mine...

This is one weird coincidence.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince and the Fifth Sutakage, out.
LUKBY chapter 7 . 6/3/2008
so human kind lost against a gay villager-trainer wuaw that was weird but in the good way.

i cant believed it at all defeated by a ash the boy with gay tendencies, I could never imagined this kind of end

Godd weird end I like it
Lixie Lorn chapter 6 . 6/1/2008
I want to see the ending.


Me-You heard the psycho Espeon.

~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.
LUKBY chapter 6 . 5/31/2008
Yeah I agree with you ash has a crush with lance (ash is gay not just gay hiper meega gay LOL)
Pixy chapter 6 . 5/31/2008
All I can think of to say is I love reading this and would love to read it til the very end to know what will happen.
Lixie Lorn chapter 5 . 5/30/2008
You need to read mine. LANCE IS THE VILLAIN IN MINE!

More lemos in mine, but that doesn't seem to matter after that chapter.


~General Everin Stormclaw, Dragon Prince, out.
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