Reviews for Moments of Longing
Daintress chapter 1 . 4/30/2011
Was thinking of Mike today, so I'm re-reading all my old favorites. Love this one! :) (Poor Mike...)
The Diamond in the Rocks chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
Poor Mike. I'll never be able to call him annoying again. And I got the "second-person" speech from my English teacher too. I love your Author notes! So funny. :)

~Sarah
s. du jour chapter 1 . 4/25/2009
aww. poor mikey.
Pancake The Thunder Hearted chapter 1 . 2/28/2009
This was so sad. I really love how you protrayed Mke. He wasn't a creepy stalker. He was jsut a boy with feelings, and with a heart that was hurt because of the oblivious neglect of a girl he really felt for.

Great job!
Aiedail01 chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
I really like this! You're right, Mike is definitely underappreciated. You did a great job with his personality. ]
vampirechick123 chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
omg, that ending part made me catch my breathe.

i feel soo bad for mike.

poor mike. really.

ah.
Kelly123 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
Aww, i've always had a little soft spot for mike...
k chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
that was so aww...

i can really feel mikes pain...

as if it was real

great one shoot!
Sepsis chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
very very nice!
Mentally Insane Fangirl chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Good story, I never had thought about Mike that much really. But it does really show to me that, really, Bella is just hopeless when it comes to Edward. As in, that she's pretty much self-centered. But that's my opinion.
Ekoaleko chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
Oh. My. God.

That was the best Twilight oneshot I have ever read. It was so touching. I'm glad you put the spotlight on Mike-I love him, too. The deep simplicity of everything was touching, and I love the format with the numbers and such. Second-person stories are really rare, and, haha, I don't think they're so bad as murder. ;D Excellent stuff. I'm addicted.
The Scarlet Sky chapter 1 . 6/5/2008
Mike love ftw!

Bella is cruel to all non-Edwards in the world, no? I like the style in this oneshot-I've never seen it before-and the way the emotions were so concise, yet so tangible. Good work. Really.
TigerLilyFire chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Very excellent. Well thought out and executed perfectly.
loveyourbiggestfan chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Great writing style! That was adorable; after reading this I'm starting to like Mike. I thought you did an awesome job with characterization. Can't wait to read more of yours!
Eve Royal chapter 1 . 5/4/2008
Aw... Poor Mike. He's sweet. Really. He kinda reminds me of a Michael in my school... Except I don't think the real Micheal longs for anybody like Twilight Mike does.

Poor Mike.

Eve
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