Reviews for Secrets
piinay-piie chapter 2 . 3/23/2004
Mary-Anne is the "good girl" *sigh* i cant believe it tho . . .i realli liked it but. . .ya write more
the princess of the desert chapter 2 . 2/6/2004
oh my gosh! Now this us something I have never seen before!
nataly chapter 2 . 1/30/2004
how come you have not written a long time, though it is great.
AngelOfTheClouds chapter 1 . 12/18/2003
Wow, I totally did not see that coming
Marnie chapter 2 . 12/17/2003
ah! plz hurry and write more
this is a good story
GypsyJen chapter 1 . 10/7/2003
Cool, keep going!
Shellie chapter 2 . 6/17/2003
This is good, but i think you could have made it a little better by having the party thing be a flashback, and having it be in a little more detail. Like PG 13 detail, I mean.
slim chapter 2 . 6/7/2003
it was good but short...e-mail me when you get to the next chapter
ilovebooksandmusic chapter 2 . 5/28/2003
I love the story so far. You have to continue soon.
Sarah chapter 2 . 5/26/2003
MoRE STORY, GIRL! MORE STORY!
wierd3orange chapter 2 . 5/13/2003
Cool...this is good! You could really think of MA like that too...so innocent and easily effected by spiked juice...lol

Weird

[weird3orange is on the way]
shaoli chapter 2 . 5/9/2003
hey,

i think ur storyline's gr8!

pls rite further an' continue da story!
peaceoutgrlmehi chapter 2 . 4/9/2003
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peaceoutgrlmehi chapter 1 . 4/9/2003
ok kind crazed -not from me just peaceoutgrlhi-notice the compound name
advicegiver chapter 2 . 2/19/2003
An interesting story which should above all else be handled carefully. Think about Mary Anne's background, how she was treated when she was young, how Logan feels, and how her father will react. For instance, given Mary Anne's sort of religious, good-girl persona, an abortion seems really out of character. If it were Stacey, Dawn or Claudia, I could see it, but not M.A.

All this advice is not meant as criticism. This is a nicely rendered story, well written, and I think it will only get better if some thought is put into it. Keep writing!
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