|Reviews for Circle in the Sand|
| Vadercat chapter 11 . 2/15
Good story, well crafted. I always felt they should have focused more on the Genii and less on Michael for their storyline. Focusing on mobsters made the show less substantial then focusing on bad guys you can identify with. I think that's why stargate was more successful, they only had a few odds and ends monsters, you could identify with the plot lines better.
| Southerncross1 chapter 1 . 1/6/2016
Great story with a well thought out plot and excellent pacing. Very entertaining. I read it in one sitting. Thanks for your hard work.
| dragoness simplicity chapter 11 . 5/12/2013
Your story turned out well. For a first story, your characterisations are spot on. Everyone was in character and really well written. I loved the dynamic between Rodney and John, from their retorts and spats to their regretful thoughts at the end. You even ended the story with words of hope, like everything is going to get back to normal. That's what every Stargate Atlantis fan fiction reader wants to read.
Chapter 1: 'He heard a sudden plash.' - splash
Chapter 10: 'he could belief they were going to be all right.' - believe
Overall it was an excellent job and a thoroughly enjoyable read. Thank you.
| clerical medical chapter 11 . 4/26/2012
Wow, this was heavy on the angst, but I really enjoyed it ('course I did, I love angst!)
| michelel72 chapter 11 . 12/23/2011
| Choas Babe chapter 11 . 3/19/2011
Did this happen before or after Doranda, because if after, HA! Suck it John. I'm tired, I'm grouchy, I like using Mckay to cause you emotional and physical angst and whump, and I totally think you deserved to take one to the kneecaps at the end of that episode. And I loved your story. Am REALLY glad I just found it, but I loved it.
| Shadows-of-Realm chapter 11 . 2/6/2010
Great work! I loved the story and can't wait for more!
| iamkagomeiloveinuyasha chapter 2 . 10/22/2009
Kolya is a complete ass but definitely my favorite of their villans
| Sharpe's Hussy chapter 11 . 9/8/2009
'Oh this is so not fair', as Rodney would whine.
I am sorry to see it all end as it was a great story...
I had no problem visualizing it all, particularly when the miserable structure imploded sending her loveliness head over heel
down into the pit where she belonged.
Just deserts IMO.
| Sharpe's Hussy chapter 8 . 9/7/2009
"Do you have any idea what that would do to my back?”
Rodney to the rescue and a bit of whining to spice it up
This is such a great story...
| Azolean chapter 11 . 9/2/2009
I do believe this is the second of your Atlantis fanfics I've found that came off quite well all the way around. Again, a few spelling and grammar errors here and there, easily overlooked. And now that I've read your bio, I am doubly impressed given English isn't your first language. As a matter of fact, your written English is far better than that of most people I know whose first language is English.
Again, I thank you for writing something well worth the time it takes to read. I hope to see more in the near future. As for this being your first...good job. Most people don't do nearly as well on a first fic off a series.
| Sharpe's Hussy chapter 5 . 8/30/2009
Please let me know what you think
My heart just aches for Sheppard...
Need to be left alone n his anger, grief, and disbelief about what had happened...
It all covers what Sheppard must have been experiencing when they returned him to his cell and Teyla tries to approach/comfort him.
I feel you covered it all...
| Theirs chapter 11 . 8/10/2009
Haven't actually read the whole thing yet, I don't have internet at my apt so I copy stories to word and then read them in my internetless home :( (I delete them after I read them). Anywho, I was making sure the story was copied correctly, didn't miss a chapter that sort of thing and found myself reading the chapters as I copied them. It is well written, with captivating beginings and endings to your chapters, so much so that am using my precious internet time reviewing a story I haven't finished yet. Again, I think you have a captivating story and I am impatiently waiting reading the whole thing (but not on my internet time).
| flowerfaerie17 chapter 11 . 5/25/2009
I felt my heart break a little when Sheppard killed Mckay, I'm glad you brought him back.
| AlexaGeorge chapter 11 . 10/7/2008
Write a sequel, write a sequel!