Reviews for In Nine Days |
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NuraHikari chapter 3 . 10/8/2013 This is so good. I loving it already :) |
divenire chapter 18 . 9/22/2013 I don't know why but this story made me feel really awkward. Maybe because Sakura seems weak. Like she's obviously letting her heart break for a stupid bet, which just makes her come off as really immature. Maybe because there's not a single time in this story where Sasuke is loveable in any sense - he's just a really, really hot asshole. Maybe it's because there never was a real climax in their emotional relationship - I still don't get why Sakura loves him so much, or what made Sasuke suddenly care for her - I mean, didn't he overtly say that they were never friends in the first place? But then she takes him to his parents' graveyard, stuff happens, it gets blown up, and he hates her again, but a few hours later, he becomes her friend? I just don't really understand the emotional progression of everything. I think you had a great idea - ingenious, really, but it wasn't well-executed. I would have loved to see a lot more introspective development happen, particularly from Sasuke's perspective. But it just seems like he thinks that she's hot and suddenly loves her. I don't know. I'm still trying to figure out what it is about this fic that makes me really uneasy. |
crimsontears82684 chapter 18 . 9/3/2013 This story was pretty cute overall. There some heart wrenching moments in there too. Overall I really enjoyed this fic. |
TerangaIsGood chapter 1 . 9/2/2013 LOL Did u get the gai running arounjd konoha after losing a bet from "The Mating Frenzy" fanfic? By MskyDragons? |
Guest chapter 10 . 8/21/2013 I have to say I got the chills reading the end of this chapter.. so sad. |
Xyra Kaze chapter 8 . 8/15/2013 Yeah. Sakura is only going to fall in love with him again lol |
Xyra Kaze chapter 7 . 8/15/2013 Lol that's sooi funny. Shame I feel so sorry for her |
Xyra Kaze chapter 6 . 8/14/2013 This was waaaay awesome! I had so much fun reading it and the part where they're dancing has got to be my favorite. |
Xyra Kaze chapter 5 . 8/14/2013 This was a cool chapter. |
Xyra Kaze chapter 4 . 8/14/2013 Ugh karin... I really don't like her. She is just way too annoying. |
Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 8/14/2013 I think sakura is going to lose the bet because she won't be able to break up with him. No I don't think he's mad I think he's horny lol |
Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 8/14/2013 Technically freezing up is a response so her objective was reached but ya. Lol awesome chapter. |
Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 8/14/2013 This was so interesting. I feel so sorry for ino or sakura... lol who ever loses the bet. Naruto should never be trusted when it comes to an idea with that wide grin. |
gabby chapter 15 . 8/9/2013 first of all this review is prob. really late and you published this a long time ago but i just fished this chapter and this fanfic is amazing. it make me tear up at parts no lie i promise it made me smile, frown, cry, and most of all (warning this is kinda weird) it make me talk to myself out loud. only really good fanfics make me do that. i hate books but i love reading long fanfics lol and yours is really good. |
Guest chapter 18 . 8/9/2013 i wish youd write a sequel to this story its really good |