Reviews for Demons and Angels
Deviant-Hulk chapter 1 . 1/9/2013
I have read all of the chapters, i seriously believe this is a fantastically written story
Please continue!
vincent1875 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I got about halfway through before I couldn't take it anymore. First thing was that Naruto acted nothing like a 5 year old at the start.

Next, there was no reason for the Hokage to let them leave the village unsupervised. They're Konoha's two most potentially powerful assets and they just leave the country unprotected and waltz into another hidden village? Ridiculous. That's careless beyond belief.

Last, there's no reason they're so strong at the age of 8. It's unnatural. If they're that strong then they would have graduated early like Kakashi and Itachi and had already been Chuunin or whatever. At the very least I'd have expected you to go through their training to explain why they're so strong.
Clove15 chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Love the story.
Siblings-Curse chapter 6 . 5/15/2011
Siblings-Curse chapter 5 . 5/15/2011
I love you for writing this! Will you marry me?
Siblings-Curse chapter 4 . 5/15/2011
This is amazing.
Siblings-Curse chapter 3 . 5/15/2011
are Haku and Zabuza going to survive in this story?
Siblings-Curse chapter 2 . 5/15/2011
I don't know what Angst is either...
Siblings-Curse chapter 1 . 5/15/2011
When are they gonna meet Kyuu-chan?
naru7 chapter 1 . 4/7/2011
I love this story.
Kuroi 002 chapter 14 . 2/28/2011
It's a pitty that you put the story for adoption, i really like it, specially the plot.

I hope that who ever continues with the story doesnt change many thing or that their writing style is similar.

If someone adopts it could you please post and update telling who?

Thanks :D
Please chapter 14 . 2/6/2011
Quit writing chapter ones and write oneshots instead. Write really long ones.
hirochick chapter 14 . 2/5/2011
i just loved this story so far and if anyone adopts it please post it.
Mtg.Uzumaki1 chapter 14 . 2/4/2011
Hi can u let me no if anyone adopts it so I can read it

Hurricane Kazama chapter 13 . 12/31/2010
Nice... it's a pretty good story. i find it amusing that Naruto and Sasuke are now half brothers. Anyways, great story, but are you still writing? it was last updated in '08 and its '10, getting close to '11...
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