Aw i loved the ending! glad the story ended on a high note!

i like it

I was wondering when you were going to update :) Great chapter, and I loved the bit at the beginning with Danny's memories of what had happened, and then the realisation that he was okay and time had moved on. Ah, and the dog was cute too :) Don's birthday party was very cute, I could picture them all there and happy, they deserve a bit of happiness, and your little Mac and Stella moment did not pass me by :D I've really enjoyed your story, I hope you write some more soon!

Thought it was a very good story and I'll be waiting to read some more of you work. This is going to my favs. Great job!

Huzzah! Definitely a worthy ending to your story luv ~_ Think I might just go back and start again...

And onward! To more CSI geekery *grin*

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This chapter was AWSOME! a cliffy! Please dont hurt Danny :) lol cant wait to find out what happens next!

plz dont make danny die

He he, I'm not the only one who likes torturing characters :) But oh my gosh! You';ve surely not killed Danny? You couldn't? Could you...? Very, very tense, and I liked the little bit with Ellie and Aiden, and I loved the image of Don in a chair, snoring with his chin on his chest :) Action Flack too, brilliant, and he got the bad guy! Really hope there can be an update soon. Hope you had fun in Cardiff!

no way, i mean the stress from having to hang over a cliff like this one can really take a toll on a person. please update soon. my arms hurt. -aspen

Anouther amazing chapter!

cant wait to find out what happens to Danny!

Oh poor Danny :( But at least he's out of surgery and has made it so far. I think you described the tension really well, and what it must feel like as Don and Ellie wait for him to come out, after pacing the floor. As before, I really like their interaction, and Ellie's thoughts on Don being a cop. I also liked the brtief appearance and the character of Bruce! Your OCs are really good. And of course, I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)

Review! OMGZ like so amazin!11 ~_

Oh no, don't kill him off. The suspense is terrible!

My computer crashed so this review is for chap 14,15,16. great job as always, i am glad they finally got out of there but i really really hope you don't kill danny off.

Oh no! Danny! What have you done? I hope he's not dead, please don't kill him! I'm not being hypocritical at all...

Fantastic chapter, I really enjoyed it. I loved how you wrote Don being in 'big broter mode' and talking about corned beef wednesdays, that was great. Really tense action scenes too as they wait, and then move in. I was shocked when the gunshots rang out. Loved Flack's comment about how his wound was just a scratch compared to being blown up, that's just the attitude he would have :) I'm glad Ellie is okay, but I just hope Danny is too. Please update soon!