Reviews for Between the Lines
Sudoku.Music.Banana chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
Not great, but ok. Would be better if continued, but since you published this about 3 years ago...
Realynn8 chapter 1 . 9/28/2008
I liked it.
Iagus chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I have no ideas to make the end better, because I like it so much already. A really nice short story.
Watchtheleavesfall chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I think that you're being way to hard on yourself! This is excellent and there's absolutely nothing wrong with the irony - it has a real bittersweet poignancy to it - and its utterly heartbreaking, for both Peter and Claire. So I don't think that you should change it - keep it as it is, please! Hey, maybe you should do a companion piece from Peter's pov - does he notice Caitlin's anguish?

Great song as well, btw - I went and found it on Youtube to listen to while I read your fic and its lovely, really moving.