|Reviews for White Rain
| ThePirateQueen367 chapter 9 . 7/30/2023
I don’t understand why they’re so interested in her bedroom activities. I mean understand because of her bedroom activities she got with Itachi Uchiha and had kids with him. But the contents of what they did while they were in bed together shouldn’t be you know something they should be really interested in. They make it seem like she’s some sort of freak for wanting stuff like that obviously she has certain taste when she’s having sex with somebody in her bedroom but that doesn’t spill over the other aspects of her life. The moment it became clear to her that her ex-husband was going to hurt her children she got the fuck out of there.
Also obviously there was something that was tying her to her husband which made it so that she had to stay with him in the duration of time that she did they just don’t know it yet cause haven’t got to that point.
| Chris chapter 4 . 7/12/2023
Dont know if you‘ll read this, but i just wanted to say thanks for this piece of art. Im going through a rough time rn, and a story like this makes me happy deep down. Much Love
| Pomelo chapter 20 . 12/27/2022
Absolute chills. I read this year's and years ago when you first wrote it, and suddenly remembered it the other day and tried to find it using a Google search. So freaking glad I did. I read this the first time as a young teenager, and reading it again now as an adult closer in age to Lucia herself. The lines from Naruto, to Sasuke "trust me. I will protect your family this time." and to Lucia, "you are a tank. A fortress." made me stop to blink away tears. It's incredible how you set up the pieces to slot into place like this. Thank you for writing this, and I'm so glad it's still on archive! If you have any professional work, I would love to see how I could support you :)
| ForeverDancingInShadows chapter 15 . 8/10/2022
I am absolutely in awe of the writing. The political intrigue, the character depth, the well fleshed out OCs. It's no wonder this took so many years to complete. but kudos to you for not giving up, and sticking through it until the end. I know many authors, even with the best of intentions have lives that get in the way and unfortunately the fics never get finished. I'm not sure if you still read reviews. on one hand i'm sad that I found this so late while you weren't in the writing face. it would have been nice to wonder with everyone else what was coming next and speculate in the comments, and eagerly await updates. On the other hand I think the waiting might just have killed me and I'm glad to discover it now after it's complete so I can binge it all.
You're clearly such a talented writer. After I finish this story I'm going to look into you and see if you have any other writings, or any type of online presence. I would gladly read other works by you. Whether fanfiction or original.
| LIQUIDCELL chapter 8 . 7/8/2022
OH NO... where was my Kakashi?
| LIQUIDCELL chapter 6 . 7/7/2022
Sakura did not stand a chance.
Amazing piece. Sasuke was intense as f*ck.
| LIQUIDCELL chapter 5 . 7/7/2022
I smell trouble. If this was going to be Sasuke and Lucia, I would really pity Sakura.
Great job. Well-written!
| LIQUIDCELL chapter 3 . 7/7/2022
You really are a great writer.
This was one of the best piece where you delved deeply and really understood Sasuke's psyche.
I have been surfing this site for more than ten years and I just found you from some author's fav stories. What a treasure.
I look forward to this journey and most likely will look into more of your works.
| LIQUIDCELL chapter 1 . 7/7/2022
My head hurts. I did not understand wtf was happening. LOL
| FL Flaumjaze chapter 4 . 6/22/2022
Omg, Uchiha Itachi, being flirty and sexy.. what about that~~
| samaritan17 chapter 4 . 8/29/2021
A very well written story. It is obvious that a lot of thought and love went into writing this. However, I have to stop reading after the third chapter. At this point in my life, I need a story with more of an immediate gratification style of writing and I get antsy and frustrated when things aren't said straight out. At this point I don't have the patience for suspenseful/mysterious/extremely emotional plots that build up over a long time which is funny because I loved mystery books when I was younger. I will favorite this and hope to come back to it some day in the future when my tastes in reading have changed.
| John chapter 12 . 7/20/2021
Lucia: Yeah, she is interesting enough, appropriately mysterious without being ott.
Sasuke/Sakura: I'm finding it hard not to just scroll past these parts tbh, but that's down to my own personal preferences, I read Naruto fics because I want the extra ordinary, ninjas, village politcs, jutsus, world wars and world ending conspircies.
Feelings, relationships, pregnancy... these are yawn inducingly normal things, and I would have no aversion to them if they were just simmering away in the background, but as things are I feel like this story element is being applied in this story with the subtlety of a sledgehammer.
Itach and Rina: The best part of the story by far, I love the characterisation of these OC's, keep up the excellent work.
Naruto: He feel's a little out of character but in a good way, like he has matured into a leader and everything that that entails.
| Val-Vale chapter 1 . 6/2/2021
I applaud you standing dear author. Thank you very much for this masterpiece, it was a deep and wonderful trip.
| r chapter 27 . 4/4/2021
love this story
| Sheen792 chapter 27 . 1/22/2021
I absolutely loved this story. One of the best I read. Well written & I lived the original characters. I am kinda sad it ended. It's hard to find good well written ffs. Loved it