Reviews for Toothpaste Out Of The Tube
Faye Silo chapter 1 . 5/13/2008

i loved it!


Faye Silo
MiloVentimigliaIsLove chapter 1 . 5/12/2008
LadyPurple, thank you so much! I loved this piece so much! Sirius is adorably sweet!

Astounding work, JuKe! :D
sesskagluver09 chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
oh, the impllicataions (sp?) toothpaste out of the tube? come on, you have to be like 8 not to understand that... funny as all hell tho, could use more details( yeah im just an ass and like the details in there, you know, so that way i now where shit is, what it looks like, and if theres anythin' what goes boom around, but thats dnd for yah, damn... ive cahnged alot sice i first started, or stopped 1 year ago, ah the depression.
XAdorkablexXxHotshotX chapter 1 . 5/11/2008
:D Sneaky Sirius! He's brilliant with his ways of tricking Remus in the way he asked him out... he's sweet :)
hermionegranger47393 chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
aw... ;P this was so adorable! I wish more people would review this amazing story!
HelplessRomantic chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
:D What a nice idea! Great work, like always!
SerialKisserSylar chapter 1 . 5/8/2008
aww... the concept was so sweet! The whole 'asking someone out without them knowing' cute! uber cute!

I can't get enough of your writing, Jules :-)
IdOnTwAnTyOuToSeEmEcRy chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
This was... oh my god, it was MAGICAL. :D It was SO worth my time and probably a million other peoples! I wish more people knew about this! I want to spread the word... love!
CryingxInside chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
aww that was so sweet and incredibly well written espeacially the tooth paste part. Sirius and Remus were so in character it was almost as if jk rowling wrote it!
Riku-Rocks chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
I liked this one. Sirius' thoughts on how alone Remus always seemed and wanting to hold, hug, and kiss him because no else ever had or would seemed very fitting of the charaters. The pace and style were great. There are several small grammtical errors throughout, but they do not distract from the plotline and all of the points come across just fine.
Veterization chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
:D So much love for this piece!

“I’m going to tell you that I love you in thirty seconds.” Sirius rambled, and as Remus stared in shock, Sirius murmured numbers in his head until he got to thirty.

“You’d like me to be happy, wouldn’t you?” His voice was soft, low, and deliciously seductive. Remus sighed, squirming uneasily on the couch. “I want everybody to be happy,” he answered uncertainly. “Yes, but I wasn’t thinking of everybody. I thinking of me.” “I should say you always do that, Sirius.” Sirius leaned slightly closer, edging nearer. “Oh, but who else is there to think about?”

I loved those lines! :D
rekahneko chapter 1 . 5/6/2008

I thought the premise with the toothpaste was particularly amusing and fit very well with Sirius' personality.

Jordanne chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
aww... i wish that my boyfriend did romantic stuff like that...

haha from now on im going be saying "the toothpaste is out of the tube" whenever a secret gets leaked.
the voice of singing clouds chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
yay! that was a good one! yay! ) )
LadyPurple chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Oh my god, this is exactly what I pictured in mind when I asked for this. It was entirely brilliant and inspiring for me! The toothpaste thing is soo true! If something is spilled word-wise you can never take it back... how true. I loved this story! :D
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