Reviews for Wish
DuQaine chapter 1 . 3/10
That made me cry! It's very rare that a story would move me to tears. Excellent work :)
PrettyChelsea chapter 1 . 10/1/2012
This story really made me sad. Its kinda depressing to know that not all stories comes with a happy ending that you wanted.
inustorm chapter 1 . 8/19/2009
I'll CRY I tell you! You write SO bloody well! It's insane! Wow. Honestly. Just wow.
thepinkmartini chapter 1 . 5/13/2009
That was so angsty yet so romantic at the same time.
yanagichyan chapter 1 . 10/23/2008
again, u write angtsy filled fics. i'm beginning to wonder if i'll ever stop crying.. pass me a tissue, please. *blows nose*

wonderful story as usual and loved the way you write. very solemn and mature with deep emotion. also, i was half expecting they do end up together so i was bawling again when they didn't.

i'm praying fervently that i will read a happier fic soon. please write more and i will be your personal stalker if you would write a happier ending next time! cheers!
xabie chapter 1 . 7/1/2008
Dear Autrevalse, thank you so much for writing this amazing story. Well written, wonderfully characterized, but above all, touchingly, heartbreakingly, realistic. I feel a little embarrassed saying this, but this story made me cry. What a wonderful little one-shot. I love this, I really do. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
Obsessed Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/10/2008
how poignant...

strange...the fics i came across today all have themes about letting go

time really is humans' greatest asset (for realization and reflection)...and worst enemy-hopes clashing against the uncertainty of the future. "then what?"

ah, i'm getting melodramatic. i blame you. lolz!

wonderfully writen


Make a wish, little girl says Tokiya in a near-whisper, but I already know that mine never did come true.
winoa13 chapter 1 . 5/23/2008
Oh my gash! It's great! *tears and cheers* note: i dunt cry..but i felt the drama and all those feelings...I like it...the way it's written, well, typed, the way they formal and mature...O.O it's just very nice! I think they still DO love each other...they just...CAN'T...~~) hahaha. I enjoyed it's kinda, cut...almost...but still, I think, the drama would be gone if they end up together...but still~~ haha! Anyway! It was very good! I enjoyed it! GoodLucK on your stories and everything else!


looking forward to more stories from you
G-Cleft chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I loved every word of it.

It was your plot that made this story meaningful. A fic does not need to conform to the "happy ending" standard to make it beautiful.

And the story's tone was so bittersweet, so poignant. You're brave. The rest of us are scared to attempt writing melancholic prose. However, you pulled it off. It takes courage to do that. In the final analysis, your work turned out to be far more superior than the rest of us who play it safe.

Great talent like yours should not be testing the waters. Get out there and swim with the sharks. Have an adventure of a lifetime. )

(Sorry if I scared you with the last paragraph)
eirist chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
beautiful. really beautiful and sad. heart-wrenching. i love it! :D
kyustsuki satsuki chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
aw... that just beautiful and sad at the same time.
abubi-chan chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
aw, that was nice and angsty. just how i love my fics once in a while. good job for executing their dialogs well as well as the emotion clearly. cheers!

wicked sun17 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
It's very beautiful but sad. I wish they had ended up together but this ending made it all the more touching. I hope you could continue this. Pls keep writing, I hope to read more of your work.
satomika chapter 1 . 5/5/2008



how come the genre romance and drama...

it should've been angsty...

because Fuuko and Tokiya well...

they didn't end up together...

and so i wouldn't have to read it...

so i wouldn't be moping around al day...

and being depressed...


but i get really emo when it comes to pairings i love!