|Reviews for Avaritia|
| MadMadMaddy chapter 20 . 2/6/2009
Hey, was reading through and was thinking you should write a fic called 'The Found' about all the found kids.
Just a suggestion. I love your writing style, and can't stop reading.
Can't wait till Bella finds out about the web of lies Edwards putting up.
Me loves the Jasper. I was half expecting her to wake up and fall for jazz.
Luv ya lots
Like jelly tots
| nashonne chapter 21 . 2/5/2009
You are so evil! I LOVE IT! About time someone put jane in her place! Go you! You are my favourite author so far by the way, and i've read ALOT of fanfics. Great job!
| TwilightJemS chapter 30 . 1/29/2009
How about another sequel? Please! It reminds of Breaking Dawn, not completely ending. There's so much more that could happen! Please think about it!
| ridingondreams chapter 19 . 1/27/2009
normally i dont review until the end of the story im reading...
but i couldnt resist for this chapter.
this emotional ping pong game had me laughing SO HARD!
i sounded like a crazy person. srsly!
that was AMAZING! ]
| jasper's wife chapter 30 . 1/24/2009
how dare you put this under jasper/bella you just give us all false hope that there is going to be a happy ending between said couple yet in the end there are not together how could you do this you should have put this in edwar/bella than us jasper/bella fans wouldnt yell at you and poke you with pointy objects dont think i wont if you do this to us again please right a real jasper bella one cause you sure can write just for the wrong couple
| Mogli chapter 30 . 1/23/2009
Great story! I'm still debating whether or not I should continue...ohh it's so hard! I really like Edward and bella together, but I don't think I would mind Jazz and Bella together, either!
But what would happen to Alice and Edward then...? OMG why do choices always have to be soo hard!
| Mogli chapter 10 . 1/22/2009
ohh this is great! I think I'm going to stop after Avaritia, eventhough I'm also still a bit Team Jasper...well I guess I've still got alot Chapters to read and so time to descide... :D
| elvenangel chapter 28 . 1/22/2009
What the hell? People were returning Breaking Dawn? I love the 4th one! It's tied for my favorite one. Fans can be so fussy sometimes. BTW I like this story quite a bit although I never do like reading about the Volturi very much.
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 28 . 1/21/2009
I agree with u about breaking dawn and hope that they will realise how much effort was put into it. I also know what u mean by stepping into character when writing. I love making up stories in my head but am too busy too write it out. Your stories are the best and I hope to read more. Your the Best nia!
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 19 . 1/21/2009
when i read about the emotional ping pong, I laughed so hard i couldnt breathe and collapsed from lack of oxygen and finished this chapter 2 days later
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 14 . 1/21/2009
I forgot to ask before but why were u talkin like a pretty from the dook Pretties by westerfield or something. I mean bubbly and vex making?
| xxXAngel of InsanityXxx chapter 12 . 1/21/2009
Emmet was really ... wierd. can u let him spend a little time bella too can u make a sequel to thist too? so many questions not enough answers! reply as soon as u can
| Emilie chapter 28 . 1/20/2009
I just wanted to tell you that your story is great! I cannot stop reading! I think you're gifted.
The chapter where Bella and Jasper play their "emotion game" cracked me up, I just couldn't stop laughing!
In this chapter, when you make Aro say "il mio cara", if you mean "my dear", then it would be "cara mia". Just thought I'd mention that if you happen to edit your chapters ;).
Regards from Switzerland!
| naysers chapter 28 . 1/19/2009
I was shocked when I heard people did not like Breaking Dawn! & Yes, just because you were not happy with the outcome of a book that doesn't mean the author isn't good! I TOTALLY agree with you! People can be so ignorant and rude. Hearing that disgusted me. Stephenie is an amazing author and I am glad you had acknowledged that.
| yankeerose chapter 30 . 1/19/2009
Thank you for writing your story. I enjoyed every chapter.