|Reviews for Avaritia|
| Anlynne chapter 14 . 2/12/2009
I was really upset it didn't follow protocol, her not remembering memories, but this makes it more intriguing.
By the way, I know you're British and I am nearly positive someone's corrected you, but I don't like to think of it as a correction, just something I'm pointing out. A garden to you is a backyard to us. Please don't take offense by my "correction" because I write HP fan fiction and I know I've made many mistakes in your slang.
| Anlynne chapter 13 . 2/12/2009
Fantastic! Unlikely? I don't know about that. How unlikely is all of it? Vampires with special abilities? Who's to say that a power like that couldn't exist! That's great!
| Anlynne chapter 11 . 2/12/2009
No blood... Interesting...
| Anlynne chapter 10 . 2/12/2009
You know, I'm pretty peeved that you are making this Edward/Bella, but for the sake of your lovely writing I'm going to read the rest, and then I'll move on to the story meant for us Jasper/Bella people. But goodess. I LOVE her powers! Maybe it's because she has loved Edward and Jasper so deeply that their powers stuck with her? Amazing...
| Anlynne chapter 8 . 2/12/2009
I refuse to accept that it was because of Jasper that Bella feels that way towards him whenever he's near him. It does make sense... Butt only a little? Why is she only feeling this now? She's been around Jasper before, like in a hotel with Alice. It's not the first time.
| Anlynne chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
Crap... This sucks... I was hoping...
| Anlynne chapter 4 . 2/11/2009
I'm confused... Does she love Jasper or not? Her feelings are a bit back and forth...
| Anlynne chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
No, no, please go soppy! This was amazing, a hopeful turn. Exactly the one I'd been hoping for! Of course, I hoped that Edward wouldn't marry her... That's what the annulment is for, right?
| Anlynne chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Ugh. Not the beginning I was hoping for... But it's a good start.
| MadMadMaddy chapter 20 . 2/6/2009
Hey, was reading through and was thinking you should write a fic called 'The Found' about all the found kids.
Just a suggestion. I love your writing style, and can't stop reading.
Can't wait till Bella finds out about the web of lies Edwards putting up.
Me loves the Jasper. I was half expecting her to wake up and fall for jazz.
Luv ya lots
Like jelly tots
| nashonne chapter 21 . 2/5/2009
You are so evil! I LOVE IT! About time someone put jane in her place! Go you! You are my favourite author so far by the way, and i've read ALOT of fanfics. Great job!
| TwilightJemS chapter 30 . 1/29/2009
How about another sequel? Please! It reminds of Breaking Dawn, not completely ending. There's so much more that could happen! Please think about it!
| ridingondreams chapter 19 . 1/27/2009
normally i dont review until the end of the story im reading...
but i couldnt resist for this chapter.
this emotional ping pong game had me laughing SO HARD!
i sounded like a crazy person. srsly!
that was AMAZING! ]
| jasper's wife chapter 30 . 1/24/2009
how dare you put this under jasper/bella you just give us all false hope that there is going to be a happy ending between said couple yet in the end there are not together how could you do this you should have put this in edwar/bella than us jasper/bella fans wouldnt yell at you and poke you with pointy objects dont think i wont if you do this to us again please right a real jasper bella one cause you sure can write just for the wrong couple
| Mogli chapter 30 . 1/23/2009
Great story! I'm still debating whether or not I should continue...ohh it's so hard! I really like Edward and bella together, but I don't think I would mind Jazz and Bella together, either!
But what would happen to Alice and Edward then...? OMG why do choices always have to be soo hard!