Reviews for Avaritia
Anlynne chapter 14 . 2/12/2009
I was really upset it didn't follow protocol, her not remembering memories, but this makes it more intriguing.

By the way, I know you're British and I am nearly positive someone's corrected you, but I don't like to think of it as a correction, just something I'm pointing out. A garden to you is a backyard to us. Please don't take offense by my "correction" because I write HP fan fiction and I know I've made many mistakes in your slang.
Anlynne chapter 13 . 2/12/2009
Fantastic! Unlikely? I don't know about that. How unlikely is all of it? Vampires with special abilities? Who's to say that a power like that couldn't exist! That's great!
Anlynne chapter 11 . 2/12/2009
No blood... Interesting...
Anlynne chapter 10 . 2/12/2009
You know, I'm pretty peeved that you are making this Edward/Bella, but for the sake of your lovely writing I'm going to read the rest, and then I'll move on to the story meant for us Jasper/Bella people. But goodess. I LOVE her powers! Maybe it's because she has loved Edward and Jasper so deeply that their powers stuck with her? Amazing...
Anlynne chapter 8 . 2/12/2009
I refuse to accept that it was because of Jasper that Bella feels that way towards him whenever he's near him. It does make sense... Butt only a little? Why is she only feeling this now? She's been around Jasper before, like in a hotel with Alice. It's not the first time.
Anlynne chapter 7 . 2/11/2009
Crap... This sucks... I was hoping...
Anlynne chapter 4 . 2/11/2009
I'm confused... Does she love Jasper or not? Her feelings are a bit back and forth...
Anlynne chapter 2 . 2/11/2009
No, no, please go soppy! This was amazing, a hopeful turn. Exactly the one I'd been hoping for! Of course, I hoped that Edward wouldn't marry her... That's what the annulment is for, right?
Anlynne chapter 1 . 2/11/2009
Ugh. Not the beginning I was hoping for... But it's a good start.
MadMadMaddy chapter 20 . 2/6/2009
Hey, was reading through and was thinking you should write a fic called 'The Found' about all the found kids.

Just a suggestion. I love your writing style, and can't stop reading.

Can't wait till Bella finds out about the web of lies Edwards putting up.

Me loves the Jasper. I was half expecting her to wake up and fall for jazz.

Luv ya lots

Like jelly tots

nashonne chapter 21 . 2/5/2009
You are so evil! I LOVE IT! About time someone put jane in her place! Go you! You are my favourite author so far by the way, and i've read ALOT of fanfics. Great job!
TwilightJemS chapter 30 . 1/29/2009
How about another sequel? Please! It reminds of Breaking Dawn, not completely ending. There's so much more that could happen! Please think about it!
ridingondreams chapter 19 . 1/27/2009
normally i dont review until the end of the story im reading...

but i couldnt resist for this chapter.

this emotional ping pong game had me laughing SO HARD!

i sounded like a crazy person. srsly!

that was AMAZING! ]
jasper's wife chapter 30 . 1/24/2009
how dare you put this under jasper/bella you just give us all false hope that there is going to be a happy ending between said couple yet in the end there are not together how could you do this you should have put this in edwar/bella than us jasper/bella fans wouldnt yell at you and poke you with pointy objects dont think i wont if you do this to us again please right a real jasper bella one cause you sure can write just for the wrong couple
Mogli chapter 30 . 1/23/2009
Great story! I'm still debating whether or not I should continue...ohh it's so hard! I really like Edward and bella together, but I don't think I would mind Jazz and Bella together, either!

But what would happen to Alice and Edward then...? OMG why do choices always have to be soo hard!
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