Reviews for Avaritia
Bellawish2b chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Love this, how can she hope that he will forgive her, when she says that he forgives her too easily all the time? Sorry, but im on Edwards side. He didnt deserve what he got AT ALL. he loved her but i think that its edwawrds fault too, Jaspers blood lust and Edwards blood lust was neck in neck if not Jaspers was worse and yet Jasper could love Bella the way she wished that Edward would. Yes Edward feared for her life, but so did Jasper, but he decided to let love overcome the lust. I hope that Edward and Alice get together.
lanna-misssunshine chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I loved this chapter so much... for some reason Edward was the one that pissed me off in it, the way one minute he was saying they'll go on their honeymoon the next he's being a dick and how he got all pissy just because Jake was comforting her. :oP

Anyway, update soon please or I will probably spontaneously combust with the anticipation of what's going to happen next! :o(

-Lanna
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
oh my they got married anyway i would have thought edward would not be with her. and they are still going on the honeymoon is this going to end with edward or jasper just curious
Feline of Ave. B chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Whoa. That was some kind of intense! I'm really happy you decided to do a sequel!

I hope Edward forgives Bella...and Rosalie gets burned at the stake. haha.
HeavenlyAngel14 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Amazing first chapter! I love how much care and thought you put into naming your stories! I can't believe how much i hate rose at this point, i don't know how she can be happy at a time like this when everyone else in her family are arguing and screaming at each other! I love how they are moving to the UK! It's just as good if not better than the USA! Ugh i actually feel sorry for Jake, imagine having to hear that, specially when he's head over heels in love with Bella! And when Jasper got all upset and started ripping trees up. That was such a heartwrenching moment, i could feel his pain so vividly. I loved it and I'm glad you like being back in the game!
Miss.Rinnibee chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Ah-mazing! I love it. I can't wait to see how everything turns out. Review soon please
frieda79 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
yes. you did it..

i love the sequel..

thanks
xDillyx chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
YES YES YES!

I MISS YOU I MISS YOU I MISS YOU!

OMG OMG OMG I HAVE THIS ON MY FAVORITES AND I CHECK IT SEVERAL SEVERAL SEVERAL TIMES A DAY FOR UPDATE I LOVE YOU! YOU MADE MY DAY
Miss Lurker chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Drama, drama, drama.

YAY FOR SEQUEL. *happy dance*
SammyLovesJasperHale chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I love the sequel so far! :D

Update soon!

:)

xo
halojones chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
aw, hell to the naw! That was a great chapter-dang, poor Edward!
Joker molester here chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Omg omg omg A-m-a-zing i lv this chap keep it up x
Sheena Is A Punk Rocker chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
aww poor Bella. [

i hope she ends up with Jazzy...
deletethisaccountpleasenthanks chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Ahh! Stupid Jasper had to mess everything up at the wedding.

Can't wait to see what happens & how things turn out.
lia516 chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I'm so glad you're doing a sequal. That cliffy had me totally freaked out
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