|Reviews for Priority Mail|
| sweet.sonata chapter 1 . 3/14/2009
This was great (great). Yeah, I thought it looked a lil hard to read. Eh, BUT seriously, this first chapter rocked and Im soo looking foward to the next. You already set up the family dynamic, which is great, so the readers wouldn't have to guess on what kind of relationship development Cloud and Tifa had. It was really interesting that you pointed out the expectancy that Cloud already had, callind Cid and arranging for Yuffie to watch the bar. I was happy that Tifa noticed this and is thinking like a woman and Cloud is just clueless cluelss clueless.
Ah, so oblivious.
And can I say WOW..it's not exactly angst but I sure felt it.
Great work! Please update soon!
| Kainos Ktisis chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Nice writing. I don't know if it's just me, but there seems to be a bit of a lack of good (grammatically) stories being written for FF7 lately. It's always nice to bump into one that is. _ Anyhow, consider me definitely intrigued and looking out for more!
| Ann Valentine chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
I love the way you're characterizing Marlene and Denzel, and really fleshing out the world they live in. Looking forward to more!