|Reviews for Don't Panic|
| ChErRyBlOsSoM274 chapter 3 . 9/23/2012
this is cool i cant wait till you continue. Its really interesting and mysterious and thats what i like about it so i cant wait till you continue
| xXWingedWerefoxXx chapter 3 . 7/16/2010
You have a great writing style, better than most fics these days. I hope you havent given up, because this story is very promising. Disclaimers are just there to keep the lawyers away. But it is pointless. Keep up the good work and I beg of you, UPDATE SOON PLZ, I NEED MORE! MOAR!
Keep it Open,
| Shanalir chapter 3 . 4/2/2010
Great new chapter! The difficulties with Sai-zombie were really well written, in-depth enough to really let you see what Naruto was feeling, without getting so overwhelmingly into it that the introspection overshadows the rest of the story. and now you have me wondering a few things.. but I won't ask and ruin the story surprises for myself. I really love the way you're doing this, and you can rest assured that I'll still be following years from now, if it does wind up taking you that long to finish it. Something this good is worth the wait.
| wouldn't you like to know chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
hahaha i am reviewing without signing in! What a evil devious plan... well really i am just being lazy and not wanting to sign in.
Well writen and i loved the chapter. I laoved the part where you wrote: "zombies confined spaces BAD" That was really funny!
So yeah, this is just a shout out from someone you would like to know just saying: Yay you updated!
| demon lilith chapter 3 . 3/30/2010
You're not dead! And here I thought a zombie got you.
This story is going great. I can't wait to see if Sakura can find the cure.
| The Wandering Soul of 1014 chapter 2 . 3/30/2009
-Please tell me the Hyuga cousins are Hinabi and Neji . . .
Happy writing, and update soon!
| Kor-Phaeron chapter 2 . 3/11/2009
Nice dude, keep it up! I like this!
| Random Clone chapter 2 . 3/7/2009
Hey! I'm really intrigued by where this story is going! I can't wait to see more of it coming! :D
| He Who Rules With an Iron Hoof chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
Everyone knows microwaves explode on contact with the undead.
Haven't you read the Zombie Survival Guide? or played Left 4 Dead?
| wdango chapter 2 . 3/7/2009
I need more.
| wdango chapter 1 . 3/7/2009
| kaki-kitsune chapter 2 . 1/17/2009
I love your chapie! I didn't know you had updated,why didn't you tell me...(cries in a corner)
Anyway, love where your taking this story, keep it up. i was afraid that you'd givin up on writing, silly me right?
But, one question. Why, oh WHY did you have to have Shika bitten? He's one of my fav characters and you killed him. WHY, WHY!
Hope you have a chill day,
| Aichu chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
By the way, is the title based of the Coldplay song by any chance? :D
| Aichu chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Zomg, a naruto zombie fic this is BEYOND awesome! Where were you hidding this from me all this time? D Silly girl.
This is just freaking cool. I love the dreary, depressed atmosphere. The scene where Naruto is visiting the graves is brilliant, and at the same time spooky. Dang, now I can't stop picturing what zombie Lee would look like XD.
"They had long since ditched the microwave, and used it as a weapon. Who would have thought that microwaves explode when they come into contact with the undead?"
That part made me laugh, btw. Some great comic relief there.
There are a couple sentences that are a bit awkward, such as "Naruto shouldered the bag full of food, then surveyed the rest of the store." By changing your sentences up a bit from time to time, you can add more variation. For example, with this sentence you could rewrite it as, "After shouldering the bag full of food, Naruto surveyed the rest of the store" or something like that. You have great sentence structure, but I find you like to start your sentences out with the character's name or a pronoun a lot. Though there's nothing wrong with that, really, but if you're not careful it can make your sentences sound a bit repetitive.
For now, that's about all the advice I can offer.
I really want to find out what happened to Sasuke, so write some more! *hypocrite*
| kaki-kitsune chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
Hey, i loved it! why didin't you mention that you were done the chapter? Or did you say and i was reading or something and missed it. if so sorry.
Keep it comming. It should prove to be VERY interesting.