|Reviews for Senyaichiya|
| Jenny chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
Hmm.. this was a pretty interesting beginning, and I hope you'll continue with it.
Um, there's just one thing I'd like you to think about fixing, and that's to divide the paragraphs, because it gets pretty annoying to read if you don't.
Well, good luck with your story and I hope for an update soon. .~