Reviews for A Graboid's Lament
GS12 chapter 1 . 9/29/2011
you cant kill a graboid like that the live under ground do they even need air and ther graboid they have never ben call tremor worms and am not hating but i give it a 1/10
CreativityIsWriting chapter 1 . 7/19/2010
I would have to agree Burt wouldn't kill himself like that if he did kill himself he would blow himself up with one of his homade bombs and I almost positive that graboids can't hunt or find anything if it not moving or making some sort of sound.
skiergurl chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
i like it its good...but i dont think burt would ever where a straw hat or commit suicide...burt wouuld go down fighting,he wouldnt just sit there and die.