|Reviews for Collar|
| Amielleon chapter 1 . 9/8/2011
Some of the interactions are a little dramatic for my taste, but on the whole I found this very entertaining and sweet. I enjoyed reading this, and I like the dynamic you set up between Kyza and Lyre.
| FEGeek chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
Lol. Totally love this pairing Again, your writing style is superb.
| Fairy of the Flames chapter 1 . 1/7/2011
Hooray! An awesome story from an awesome author. It took me a second to realize that you're the one that wrote 'Ribbon' but as soon as I figured it out, I let out a pure fangirl squeel. There aren't enough Lyre/Kyza stories out there. This is the best one, which isn't saying much, unfortunately. I think the characters were quite IC. Good job! It was wonderful. It ties with Ribbon for my favorite Laguz stories.
| PINKDIAMOND4000 chapter 1 . 11/5/2010
awww poor Kyza! he likes Lyre to much he should confess to her or something! because she thinks it was Ranulf :(
| FELyreRocks chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
omg. luv dis story. Lyre is the bestest character in radiant da- no! In all of Fire Emblem history!
| beckendoof chapter 1 . 9/5/2010
Oh-so bittersweet. That unrequited love fits in with Kyza's "gentleman" image, I think.
Loving your writing, dear!
| UbelGaber chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
Give me a moment to squeal a little.
And then my big, sad A'w :'C
Anyway, my reactions aside, I enjoyed this very much!
It's well-written (and trust me, I'm not saying that just because-I'm very picky about grammar and spelling) which is WONDERFUL to read.
I've personally never been too fond of Kyza (perhaps because the laguz were significantly less useful in Radiant Dawn unless they were a King or Queen) but I HAVE always supported Kyza/Lyre and this fic did a great deal of justice to the pairing.
I'm also impressed by your characterization of Kyza and Lyre-granted, it varies ever so slightly from what I remember about their characters; but, then again we, as writers, get a little leeway and liberty when writing as a character (and Lord knows I'm much worse at keeping the characters I write in character).
All in all I enjoyed reading this very much, thank you for giving me a wonderful fifteen minutes, give or take :)
P.S. Sorry if this review looks daunting, it's all good, I swear! 3
| anonymous chapter 1 . 8/17/2009
The portrayal of Lyre was done very well, nice job. The use of italics did not interfere with the flow of the story, so don't sweat that. :)
| Andromeda Rising chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
It's a shame that Kyza/Lyre is so scarce, because it has so much potential and it's so cute. Too bad they didn't expand much on it in canon. Ah, well.
This oneshot is adorable. I'm glad to have found it. I like your writing style; there's a good balance between description and dialogue. The subtleties are nice, too; I like that you hint at things but don't say them outright. The flashbacks spliced into the narrative also added to the effect, and it totally worked.
The characterization is pretty good. It's true that Kyza can be serious and whatnot, but Lyre does get him going (like you said, the Info conversations are a testament to that). I think you got their characters down pat-and their dynamic, too. It's a lot like them to needlessly argue and then just make up without bearing any grudges. Their interaction was cute, and made me smile.
There were so many lines I loved in this. [“I say!” he exclaimed, appalled] just killed me. Such an appropriate reaction. And when Lyre ran her hands down his "rock" chest... the imagery is hilarious.
I wrote a longer review before this with more lines that I liked and why, but then I hit the faves button and it killed my review. Ah, well. I think I've said everything I wanted to say. Excellent work!
| Ivan the Great chapter 1 . 7/7/2009
Hey, it was good enough to take my mind away from lamenting that half this website thinks Soren is gay!
| anon chapter 1 . 3/4/2009
oh man, i love this story so much, it is gorgeous. And theyre so in-character... i love you. This is one of my favorute pairings and these are two of my favourite characters-I wish more people wrote them.
| mr. stranger chapter 1 . 11/14/2008
once again perfecto
your good with this whole flash back thing
| emberin chapter 1 . 6/12/2008
Poor Kyza. It makes me want to cry. -sniff-
Again, the writing is beautiful. By the way, 'causing the tiger flush and bristle': I think you're missing a 'to', but that's just a small thing. Nothing big pops up as an error.
I like the view on Kyza, since usually he's just that aloof, businesslike laguz, but this story takes him a different path. I noticed that too about his relationship with Lyre, and I think this is how it would have gone in my mind too.
| Blue Mage Quartet chapter 1 . 6/8/2008
OMG, Kyza/Lyre! I just used them together in the game on my last playthrough, and I've been wanting to write a story over the two FOREVER.
They were both IC, considering what little development they actually had in the game. It's a crime how they were so underused... D: I really enjoyed how you fleshed the story out with the flashbacks, and you wrote the dynamic between them really well. Poor Kyza, his love is a little one sided. Maybe Lyre will wisen up and they'll have a happy ending.
You did a great job!
| piratelore chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
Awr, this is so sweet! The first Lyre/Kyza fic I've seen, but I think I'm already addicted to it. What was in the scroll though? I'm curious ):