Reviews for Starlight
Moon chapter 4 . 5/3/2009
please continue writing, I love the story!
athenastar17 chapter 4 . 7/12/2008
RufusXVincent is teh shit. XD I love chapter four. It seems Rufus is in his rebellious phase -snerk-
Stoic-Genius chapter 3 . 5/15/2008
Everyone keeps on referring to Cloud as 'his' cadet it seems the rumors are already spreading and Zack hasn't realized it yet. Looking forward to the next chapter.
ArcanePyro chapter 3 . 5/10/2008
Very cute. I liked Seph. He was definitely in character. . Good luck with finals!
AshToastShadow2IcarusWE chapter 2 . 5/6/2008
Aw poor Cloud can't hold his liquor D': But I bet that drink tasted better coming back up than it did going down XD

Least it wasn't Hennesy [sp?]... that stuff only comes in one flavor: Battery acid.

Dude this had me giggling and I'm in one of the IT labs at school -
Cole Regnum chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Wow, very interesting side of Cloud. God I love that guy.
AshToastShadow2IcarusWE chapter 1 . 5/5/2008
Zack and Cloud's personalities are pretty spot-on so far as I know [from other things I've read concerning them], you've got good detail and nice sex tension built in ;]

I like this a lot, it's a very good start to a long and involved story and it has a lot of potential, but like I said

IT NEEDS TO KEEP GOING.

Please?

T-T