|Reviews for Fortune of Death|
| misslhydagee.sd.migs chapter 1 . 5/25/2013
it makes me cry and it was good :)
| kiah chapter 1 . 8/5/2011
| Amaya2005 chapter 1 . 5/26/2008
I.. I... I LUVED IT! OMG! AWESOME! I seriously really luv it! Though, it might have been rushed a little too me, but... damn, I was about to cry! TT
| eiLuj mEdiLLa chapter 1 . 5/10/2008
hehe... ako ng-type nyan... haha... oo nga ang haba... wel, i love d story... kng cno man mgsabi n hindi mganda ang story nito, sport!... hehehe... go niKai! gWa k p ng Mraming StoRies...
| Midnight Sleepyspray chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
I am a witless bastard. If you think you act like an eight year old crying on momma's shoulders then DON'T read this review.
Okay, I warned you. For the second time, I am a witless bastard.
Today, I am really in the mood for reading so I decided to wander around for some fics.
Your summary DID catch me.
Unfortunately, your story didn't.
To be honest, I didn't really read it. I just read the first and the second scene and poof, I had all my hyper reading mood dissipate in thin air. I just read the last scene to find out the ending.
Apparently my senses told me that the story isn't going to be interesting as I read on. The ending, was, well, to be honest, a bit crappy, a bit corny, a bit weak and all.
Since I find this fic not-so-satisfying then I decided to leave a review.
I know I am a witless bastard who gives critisms like a savvy shopper in a cheap mall but I'm just worried. You see, sooner or later somebody else may not like your fic and happen to be more insensitive than I am,(I sure do hope I'm not the most insensitive reader in FoR, or in . Don't blame me for being stupidly frank, it's my brain, not me.) so better I say it more considerately than that person.
If I offended you, I apologize. I think I did warn you.
On the bright side, your ideas are good, so just try expressing them better.
| Ushinaware Ta Kaze chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
Cute! I like this one!
| yanagi-chyan chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
aw... so warm and mushy.
i like the plot. it's good how their love could overcome something like death which was fated. also, you inserted a short epilogue and i like that! i've always loved reading happily ever after endings.. hehe.
good job, keep those fics coming!