Reviews for The Competition
xXMizz Alec VolturiXx chapter 1 . 9/30/2013
cute
93 Diagon Alley chapter 1 . 1/30/2013
This one was great too! Especially the last two lines.
Michelle Black a.k.a Elle chapter 1 . 7/1/2009
Aww! I felt bad for the family when that happen. *crying slightly* but-DUH!- he's okay.
T.Beedle chapter 1 . 1/17/2009
nice
snipe-g chapter 1 . 1/8/2009
I feel that this story had a lot more potential then it showed, if you had only continued it, the ending wouldn't have seemed as choppy. Try working on your endings or adding on chapters.

Keep Writing.

All my HP love,

Gillian
princessinct chapter 1 . 10/26/2008
I'm really enjoying your storyline. I love how Charlie and Hermione have tender moments that help develop their relationship.

Thanks.
Eliche chapter 1 . 10/22/2008
another great fic.
Burning-candlelight chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
such a sweet ending ]

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Mistymist chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
~sigh~ Charlie. Thats all I have to say.
LittleRedOne chapter 1 . 5/13/2008
Hmm...Ron has another thing coming if he thinks they'd be dating by now. And Viktor, and his poor mom. She seemed to have her heart set on Hermione. Oh well though, I like Charlie best. :)

Aw, the chapter about Mr. Weasley. Poor Charlie. It's really a terrible Christmas. At least Hermione came to him though. :)

Kelly
sylphides chapter 1 . 5/9/2008
haha, poor Victor and Ron. they don't stand a chance...and I thought Victor's mum sending Hermione that letter was a nice touch.
rebelangel566 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
love it love it! ha poor ron has no idea that his crush is going to be with his older brother. and wow victor and his mom lol.
TheDreamAmeliaFox chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
Poor Charlie.
grumpy grizzly chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
LOVE IT! I love that she hurried to comfort charlie. sigh...romance rocks!
bethbaccus chapter 1 . 5/6/2008
REally enjoying the stories, keep them up.
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