Reviews for Partially Kissed Hero
GandalfTG chapter 27 . 6h
Harry got his time Turner from Dumbledore so that he wouldn't change schools. Harry had Dumbledore over a barrel. I know Harry didn't really expect snape to really get fired, but I think you may have missed an opportunity to challenge Dumbledore openly and legitimately, especially when Dumbledore is demanding his gift back, the gift he made to keep Harry from going to Beaubatons. Harry should have pulled out the scroll and made ready to sign it. It's what he would have done if the situation Dumbledore knew about was the real situation, or at least what he should have done given past actions, attitudes, and statements.
Gojin1990 chapter 84 . 8/27
YUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUS star wars! lol that was PERFECTLY placed :D MOST impressive :D
Gojin1990 chapter 77 . 8/27
well it wouldn't matter if he was using the elder wand. as its already been beaten from dumbles. just means it won't work properly is all.
Gojin1990 chapter 67 . 8/27
meh well you couldn't really call them their own parents anyway. they didn't do any of the "FUN" things to BE their parents. XD
Gojin1990 chapter 65 . 8/27
O.O okaaaayyy...a buncha "horney" trees? O.O thats uhhmmm... new? XD
Gojin1990 chapter 55 . 8/26
oh this aught to be good. how do you plan to get them out of this pickle when it all blows over and dumbles reads hagrid and whats her names mind. they saw them ride through on a BASILISK. theres no way they can stay in hogwarts after that unless they use a time turner or something to go back and obliviate everyone :O
Gojin1990 chapter 46 . 8/26
XD run dumbles run XD the restraunts and mechanics are coming for you :D XD
Gojin1990 chapter 45 . 8/26
you sure do have a nice imagination for torturing "poor" dumbles XD and i have to hand it to you the logic that he was conniving behind the scenes definitely makes more sense then him being a goodie two shoes :C
Gojin1990 chapter 43 . 8/26
at LAST someone understands :C sure you can have your OP badass heroes. but they don't need to be like INSTANT badasses. they can GROW into their powers. I hate the really short stories on fanfic where its pretty much wham bam super OP badassery instant death of badguys.
Gojin1990 chapter 38 . 8/26
well it shows harry isn't one of the "good" guys. but he isn't full on "bad" guy either. He knows what he did is wrong, enough to upchuck even after all the dursley's have done to him. course I don't think the bit about them eating each others flesh was needed...that was pretty icky O.O I think just saying he would have turned each of them into some kind of flesheating dark magical creature would have been enough of a guess on what he planned to do. still a damn good story. but definitely some dark icky bits O.O
Gojin1990 chapter 37 . 8/26
ok that last bit was a bit of glaring plot hole fixer sprayed in copious amounts XD still the stories damn good imo XD
GandalfTG chapter 8 . 8/26
Obviously Dumbledore's reaction to the stabbing/poisoning was an allergic reaction to the MSG that was added to the list of ingredients...
:)
Gojin1990 chapter 11 . 8/25
jesus when you explain it like this are we sure THIS is the fanfiction? :O this seems closer to the story then the original book like seriously. how can the characters be THAT bad without purposely working that way O.O I hope you intend to finish this story. its damn good. not sure how i look at a "dark" potter but having him be realistic and more of a backbone does make sense O.O anyway good job :D
Happy1K1nob1 chapter 46 . 8/23
Indeed I did!
rnthenu chapter 103 . 8/21
Definitely one of the worst fanfics I've had the great misfortune of coming across. Positives, start was good I guess before the whole fairy crap started out, plus the whole going back in time and NASA part was bit amusing.
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