Reviews for Partially Kissed Hero
joshdougherty0605 chapter 103 . 11/20
I notice how all you naysayers barely break the surface of stories and hide behind the use of guest reviews.I got some secret information for you. When you don't like a story... you don't have to read it, and if your not reading the story why are you wasting everyone's time reviewing it? This story is one of the most interesting well put together worlds I've seen. It has set rules boundaries, actions and reactions, as well as showing how truly hopeless the cause was without some drastic intervention. Great job, and listen not to the cyber bullies that only spew criticism because they can't do it and much like your evils have show if they can't do it they want no one to.
circus boy chapter 45 . 11/14
I love this story your writing of hilarious and I love it
alf117 chapter 103 . 11/13
I have enjoyed your story, will you be working on it to finish it?
Guest chapter 19 . 11/7
Lol they created new bodies and now have different skills lol This story is shit and can’t keep reading/skipping lol you should honestly quit being an author or writing in general because you have no idea what the fuck your doing lol you’re awful.
Guest chapter 18 . 11/7
Another chapter skipped because of how shit it is
Guest chapter 16 . 11/7
Just skipping chapters because of how boring and shitty they are lol how bad of an author do you have to be to write over 100chapters but half of it is repetitive and the other half is boring as fuck
Guest chapter 14 . 11/7
Please don’t add vampires lol this story would somehow get even worse if you add them lol story is pure shit so far
Guest chapter 13 . 11/7
My god this story fucking sucks... it’s so boring. You describe something and drag it out for paragraphs then you describe it again with even more paragraphs. Wow this was a waste of time lol rating 1/5
Guest chapter 10 . 11/7
Anyone else just skipping half of the chapters because it’s so boring and unnecessary
bloodplus663 chapter 103 . 11/7
Please update partially kissed hero .
Guest chapter 7 . 11/6
Wow there have been fanfics where I just loved Luna but never a Luna like this... at first I thought she had multiple personalities when she was explaining herself but after she finished I realized how dangerous she is lol and hoping him and Hermione don’t end...
Guest chapter 6 . 11/6
Man I know that ending of this chapter if I wasn’t baked would’nt have thought it was funny but I’m stoned and I am dying lol
Guest chapter 5 . 11/6
Okay I was confused about how he got the horcux out of the Lestrange vault but after that part with Bella lol I’m laughing so hard that was perfect! Now Bella is going to be another girl? Or just a insane overprotective follower? Idk if they do it in the HP world but it could make sense to have multiple wives if you were the Lord of multiple houses but it also doesn’t make sense at all because it’s polygamy
Guest chapter 30 . 11/6
Okay I tried to read this story a couple of years ago and gave up somewhere around chapter 33. I've given it an honest effort to read it through to the End. I'M not strong enough I'm sorry to say. The plot is solid, I like the pairing the fey angle is original and some 9f the humor bits are great. The problem I have is all the exposition, for a fantasy story to bore you as much as a text on Tax Law is ridiculous. Somethings the reader should figure out ON THEIR OWN! Anyway I'm throwing in the towel on this one
Guest chapter 26 . 11/6
And the poor very bored reader snaps... in the forest a flash of red and blue appears sorrounded by white stars, next to the blood cauldron right as Hermione ask yet another question. He calmly Rares back and smacks her repeatedly while drones on yet more exposition. Hermione finally succumbs to the blows and passes out. With one job complete the slightly more stimulated reader grabs a cricket bat and cathe Harry mid boring explanation in the head. ... I've always said that one of these days I'm going to write myself into someone's story when it gets the q &a exposition scene and finally did it
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