Reviews for Partially Kissed Hero
pincho chapter 103 . 10/23
A fun if somewhat wordy crackfic. Definitely worth a read for the humor alone.
pincho chapter 99 . 10/22
Overall the story is entertaining. Unfortunately, the author tends to repeat himself regularly and expound on topics that he barely understands let alone bothered to look up. Google and decent population sites were a thing in 2008. For a small example, Indian has a decent sized Muslim population while China was in the top 10 and has been for decades, so the "group " nukes would have hugely affected them.

Next example is that no one "land grabs" nuked areas. The whole point of m.a.d. was destruction of anything worth anything. So all those nice areas to have a Naval base are unlivable, not to mention everything close is now partially irradiated as well from fallout.

Anyway the wonderland bits have been positively,hilariously entertaining but the core group story line has become rather superfluous. At this point Sybil has done more the group.
ericandpete chapter 103 . 10/16
I read this at least twice a year. It is one of my all time favorites. It never gets old.
dixonjason403 chapter 9 . 10/7
uh...that was definitely...something...
dixonjason403 chapter 8 . 10/7
ah, so this is a full on crack fic. it wasnt entirely clear before but...it sure is now.
dixonjason403 chapter 2 . 10/7
malfoy getting chucked off the train is...really fuckin funny actually. i love it. i dont love he rest of the chapter nearly as much. the pacing is absolutely fucked and the story is going way to hard on the telling and not enough on the showing. the story is just kinda stating stuff instead of telling a story, its not great to read.
Master777vip0000 chapter 1 . 10/6
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trista.sterling chapter 103 . 9/26
Very cool story. I enjoyed reading it.
trista.sterling chapter 65 . 9/22
I also love it when a bunch of plot lines coalesce, especially when I didn't really think of them as being connected before. It's a lot of fun. Awesome plot planning!
trista.sterling chapter 45 . 9/18
I enjoy the way you tie disparate and ancient and fictional elements together. This is a very cool story, and I am enjoying reading it very much!
Lyverion chapter 95 . 9/16
The irony of course is that Dumbledore continues to have no idea that the chicken was a ruse and that his real enemy is an entire pride of lions.

Lions of course being quite capable of taking out wolves pride to pack.

As such he is in fact falling into a trap created by his own attempt to dictate the prophecy.
pippinincarnate chapter 6 . 9/13
reading fanfics has taught me to completely subdue and eliminate any amusement in a situation like sitting in a room full of family members who think you're researching the structure of bacteria and fungi. now i always win try not to laugh challenges.
Lun Guang Yue chapter 1 . 9/12
Wouldn't a compartment trunk be the best!? But then love portable ones (compartmentRooms,labs) whatever they are called.
Jimbocous chapter 101 . 9/7
Thanks for a really great (re)read. Would have loved to see more of this. Sure hope you find your way back to it at some point.
Westeri Halbarad chapter 10 . 9/2
Shouldn't Dumbledore's arm have blown up in the corridor when he used wand magic on Flitwick and Hooch to modify their memories?
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