Reviews for Partially Kissed Hero |
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haphazard1 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 This was great fun, seeing Harry start applying himself and soaking up knowledge. The title is a little worrisome (partially kissed? Uh oh!), but I'm curious to see where you go with this idea. Very nice beginning. |
SomeGuyFawkes chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 Nice story start, thanks! Smart Harry (without ridiculous over-powers) is always good. I'm a little uneasy at all the cr*p Harry has loaded himself up with. Such stories often devolve into silliness and/or never complete. Also, Harry getting partially kissed would make the tale very hard to complete well. Harry needs his own soul for obvious reasons. He needs the piece of Riddle's soul as that is the only realistic way to learn some of the things he needs to know (horcrux locations, for example). Finally, it doesn't make sense that Harry can't change his electives. There should be almost no impact to the school in allowing such before term even starts. |
mikek3332002 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 Haven't seen this approach taken before. Interested in how you continue it. |
Caelistes chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 I LOVE YOU. It's a smart Harry that makes sense. This is a breath of fresh air, after so many insta!smart Harry stories that seem to be floating around. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter! |
bookfanatic84 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 I like this! I hope you continue it. |
Chris ShadowMoon chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 nice. truely truely nice. actually, close to genious. Good show! (I'm not british, I just wanted to say that.) |
enderverse chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 great so far. pretty good for a InstantBookworm!Harry and you actually gave a reason for it which is more than most people do allready and i liked the staggering of buying stuff more realistic. |
dogbertcarroll chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 The Creevley brothers could be distracted from following Harry or asking for autographs if he introduced them to the idea of making yearbooks and promising to sign theirs at the end of the year. I wonder what happens to a dementor if it's forced to drink chocolate milk? |
Andrew Joshua Talon chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 I have to say, this has potential. Keep it up. |
the grey mage chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 at the begining i was like, why this? i know that you do give a very believable back story, but until i read the notes it just did not click. good luck with this one. i will continue to read just about anything you put out. |
katdemon1895 chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 i'm elated and slightly nervous that you've started another story, even if it is more of a mini series you're positively brilliant at getting characters to learn things and going from one probability to another in an entirely logical and intruiging fashion, what you've written now only goes to further prove my point- i absolutely love all the nifty things that harry got, and that he's given to hermione, i love that harry looks like he's going to be closer to hermione, neville, luna and potentially the twins than he is to ron or ginny and i look forward to more but you have a tendency not to finish things... anyway, as i said, i look forward to more |
ShiruyTheSecond chapter 1 . 5/6/2008 That's a very interesting way to motivate Harry into becoming a bookworm, seriously. It's surprising that I've never read anything like this before, considering that the explanation is so logical. I'm wondering about the title and what it has to do with the story, so I'll definitely continue reading this. Good job! |