forgot the murder holes in airlocks. Also I suspect everyone could have done this but like most things, its an expense thing.

could have just had the medalliens and be done with this entire chapter. so fucking stupid that you throw herm out of the muggle world compleatly just to force something else. also chemestry wouldn'[t be possible inside a magical field in those rules I think so u fucked the world up too lol.

at this point I think you should probably just be writing your own book.

quite the imaginative revenge.

so now its canon to ur story that harrys skills are useless, so what is the point of the premise?
also the book is really following the originals now in that everything they do is somehow insanely lucky. I can appreciate the things that they do far earlier having an affect later in the story, but it goes positivly for them every time making it seem at this point as the litteral version of deus ex machina, I'm half convinced the trio are under a permanent luck potion from the fairy queen.

also the relationship is starting to give me the creeps, they only show affection when he tell them he is wrong and they are right. kinda like they are training him like a dog.

then obliviate them b4hand or cause insainity to both. this is getting absurd.

not sure why he si worried about others making a printing press when he is in control of britan

ehh, invulnrable dumbles trope -50dkp
-199 because he is quite killable. just kill dumbles and snape at the same time if its so easy.
Also you probably should have just avoided the paper thing being so believable/ OP or not had the paper thing anyway. You are now bending reality to keep dumbledoor around.

pacing sucks but the world is good

shudering from her glare -50 dkp

a very refreshing take on the magical world. I think the goblins are evil too, lol. Now I only question if he is going to continue going to hogwarts.

damn, the dumbles is actually good. not good, but a good manipulator. hes like otta von bismarch or whatever his name was, pitting everyone against eachother to keep the peace, but in this case to maintain control.

at least its getting better

You try harry with a backbone, nice. Then dumbledoor being cartoonishly evil, less nice, but you explained it rather well, so getting better. Now harry is a slave... fail of epic proportions. You also cheapened the relationship between all of them, all without any reason. The cave part wasn't even nessisary other then an info dump on fairies of which 95% of it was pointless.

Don't get me wrong, Being helped by the Fairy queen is an interesting direction, if they weren't slaves. Should have been an offer for saving them for a defined and limited few things. You could have them later ask for more things for more deals, but this just means you have taken away all character agency from harry.

even with the explenation, bleh. Should have just had them wake up talking to the fairy queen