the dark side of loyalty is tribalism.

This also explains why there might be a misuse of muggle artifacts department

I had a 15lb bow before 10. Maybe an exceptionally weak teen girl couldn’t draw that but a male teen that can carry a single textbook to class should be able to draw a 25lb bow

this info dumping is starting to annoy me, its been 1 and a half long chs for this to still be happening, i dont sense the urgency at all, just seems like they have been standing there talking forever

man i still dont know how ffnt works cant even see comments

Rofl! Don't forget the pirate Long John Silver, the sailor Popeye, and Captain Morgan helping round out their navy. Or some of their bases, White Castle where the royalty reside and the Golden Corral where their cavalry is. Also, Smoothie King is another royal, Trader Joe supplies them, Panama Jack gets exotic ingredients from far off lands, or the many, many sports teams that have ominous names for those who don't know what they're naming. Like the Raiders, the Celtics, Cavaliers, Guardians, Cowboys, Mavericks, Warriors, Packers (not as ominous unless you wonder what they're packing), Chiefs, Royals, Chargers, Clippers, Dodgers, Brewers, Vikings, Canadiens, Texans, Predators, New England Patriots, New England Revolution, Devils, Saints, Giants, Islanders, Rangers, Yankees, Orlando Magic, Senators, Flyers, Pirates, Steelers, Blazers, Kings, Roughriders, Mariners, Buccaneers, Titans, Argonauts, Knights, Commanders, Nationals, Wizards, Bombers. There's a whole army just from sports teams that covers land, sea, and air. Just look at the wiki page for major professional sports teams of the United States and Canada.

This story went downhill the second all this fairy BS was introduced. It's just one of those tropes that cheapens the plot and doesn't fit well. The MC also seems like an errand boy who does errands for the Fairy Queen instead of an MC fighting for his own interests. Sure, it is in his interest to do her biding. But it just feels different when he does something to inconvenience Dumbles out of his own volition than when he is told to do so by the Fairy Queen. It sends a vastly different message.

It was a great idea but this turned it into 'meh'.

I now have a new favorite Harry Potter fic! I have thoroughly enjoyed all of the inventive ways that Albus and Severus have been killed off!
The changes Syble Trelawney accidentally made to the timeline were fun, too, saving JFK, and Bruce Lee. Saving Princess Diana and killing off Charles was interesting. Does the monarchy now go to Prince Andrew? Luna's family tree is amazing! Its no wonder she turned out like she did.
I sincerely hope you come back to this some day! I'd love to see how Dumb-as-a-Door is finally offed permanently, same for Tom. Does Draca end up having to fulfill the contracts with Crabbe and Goyle? Does muggle and magical life survive on Earth, or only off planet? Syble greeting the astronauts on Mars with, "Live long and prosper." was hilarious!

dark Hufflepuffyandere?
hard working, loyal to fault to her object affection, desires to become the sole friend of her crush.

Your "taking the liberty" was impressive, because you even complimented yourself, posing as complimenting a fellow author in an author's note several chapters back.

Quite impressive indeed!

I love your take on "goblin friends"...

Ah, wizards and their stupidity, always fun to see

“Please no! My Queen Dairy, forgive me!”

Talking about the very beginning of this chapter, your comment specifically, i feel that has major potential for comedy, like they go through a field of wheat and instead of bales, animated hay in the shape of chickens pops out…. for some reason

God damn this is getting old, it was fun at the start but by this point and after so much content and still basically NOTHING having changed with this dumbledore bullshit, its gotten boring, which is never a good thing for keeping readers interested

Hermione no! Not the tears!