It's odd that Dumbles just rolled over like that...

Well, in spite of being incomplete, and all but abandoned, this is still a favorite of mine, it's wonderfully inventive, and unique in so many ways. I fear it may be a vain hope, but I sincerely hope you see fit to update and finish this story.

What is it with people painting Snape like he's such an evil person, its sick and I'm so tired of finding more stories like this instead of ones showing who he really is.

Sorry 2012

I have to say out of all the fics ive read in the last 10 years you are with out a doubt one of the best authors on this site I could hardly put down my phone . Your writing style is amazing as you actually have a firm grasp on the different power levels of your heroes and villains . The only thing I can find fault in this fic is the fact that it seems abandoned what with the last update being in 2013.

Uh oh Dumbledork, Harry got smart! Yes, thinking heroes are the best! Dumbles is going to be so pissed when he finds out.
Great chapter. Oh, and Harry’s request from Wizengamont - masterstroke!

Nope. You nailed Dumbledore’s reason for using Mundungus.
You are absolutely right about the canon relationships. Especially, Ron and Hermione. It makes absolutely no sense and would only end in divorce if not abuse and murder.
Long live the finger lickers!

You are killing me! First, the Col Sanders plot line. I was laughing so hard I had tears coming out of my eyes! Then, the Luna/McGonagall conversation. Oh my, I could feel Minnie’s discomfort all the way in the States.
Great job. I am looking forward to reading more. I hope you include more snippets of Dumbledore’s crusade against the chickens.
Thanks for the laughs and the trout slapping too.

Diaper is solely Nth American terminology. UK & IRL the term is NAPPY; i.e. 'never changed a nappy.'

For the record- In the UK and Ireland, KFC only provides chips. (Fries as Yankees call them). Sides of Sweetcorn, Baked Beans & Gravy also available. NO SUCH THING AS 'BISCUITS'. (Which in America seem to be the equivalent of scones.) Not even mashed potatoes. Just chips.
As I recall, continental Europe is the same. "Biscuits & Gravy" seems to exclusively be North American.

Im against Remus and Tonks for the same reasons.
And the less said about my feelings for the Weasley family, the better.

As an aside, funny how you made the Vampires more of an advanced Zombie instead of the more romanticized version. Im still laughing about them being afraid of crossing water because of mold. LOL.

So...
Yes. This is a great story.
Good enough for it to really be a shame that it's not finished.
Never seen a similar approach to a story.
The fairy motive suits the whole thing so well. it's such a great way to justify letting your creativity out to play and a certain amount of ridiculousness as with wonderland and all that.

Some questionable bits, you already received enough critique for, but may they be extreme, you're entitled to your views and can do whatever you want with your story.

Thank you for writing and sharing and sticking with it for so long.

Hermione has been corrupted by Luna. Wonderful.

I was expecting everything but the McDonald clan in Scotland. That one caught me off guard. Thanks for the chuckles.

ahhh... who shat in your bed? Brutal generalization against the vast religious group that are Muslims?
Yes, there might have been thousands of instances of problems caused by them. Means nothing compared to how many there are though. Doesn't make anyone a bad person that hasn't done anything just for being of that religion.
Same logic works against all Christians then right? Thousands of cases of Priests abusing their power, doing horrible things to children. So their all rapists right?
After that same logic you are scum just for being whatever group you're part of just because someone of that group has done some horrible shit. And if that group is just "men", "womenolder than 15" or anything.

Narrow-minded as fuck?