|Reviews for chRONicles: American Dream|
| Skyogenic chapter 4 . 11/4/2008
SC, you say this installment of chRONicles was only supposed to be about two chapters? Well, where's the fun in that? XD
I'm glad "Plot-Zilla" ravaged the countryside of your mind, otherwise I wouldn't have been able to read a fic with such fine quality as this. It was,in all honesty, so much fun reading this, and I wish you luck on future installments.
Keep it up, SC!
| Skyogenic chapter 3 . 11/4/2008
A nice third chapter portraying the aftermath of Ron's victory over the regional. He's unsure as to whether he should continue the contest, or to just drop it all, and he needs another sign from Uncle Dave. This sign came in the form of a man who knew Uncle Dave. What a coincidence!
On to the last chapter! Keep writing...
| Skyogenic chapter 2 . 11/4/2008
Once again, another great chapter. The contest was interesting and humorous, keeping my eyes glued to the story. As always, keep it up, SC!
| Skyogenic chapter 1 . 11/4/2008
Really great chapter, SC!
Something I just recently noticed is the absence (or lack) of fanfics that ever focus on Ron's culinary talents. Let me tell you, I like this change of pace. I liked how Ron put his "Operation Paris" into play, by becoming a "French" chef with an uncharacteristic accent!
The food Ron prepared for his parents literally made my mouth water, so I congradulate you on your descriptions of those tasty meals. Keep up the great work, and I [impaciently] await your return from your writing hiatus.
Thanks for welcoming me. :D
| Sentinel103 chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
SCB, you pick scary dates, Friday October 13th, 1304 The supression of the Knights Templar in France by the order of Phillippe de Faire.
| HOLLY NIELSON chapter 4 . 6/6/2008
I SEE THAT THIS IS DEDICATED TO ME. I WAS CURIOUS AS TO THE NAME OF THE AUTHOR?
| Mengsk chapter 4 . 6/1/2008
Yeah, I would have thought it a little convenient if he won. Seven Layers of Heaven cake he would be a sure thing. Naco, not so much.
Good to see Kim making a difference. I was just thinking that in childhood those two must have been like twins or something. Sharing everything, never leaving each others side. Starting to realise she's had little impact in this series till now.
I wouldn't be too concerned about spending a 21st at a pizza palour. That would have been a dream for me.
I had an interesting 18th. Happened to in the city. Got drunk at a goth bar. It was weird I'll grant you, still...
... 'Humans' article?
| CajunBear73 chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
From the nibbles of Kim and Ron's affections for each other as best friends to their upcoming nuptials, each had something in their hearts for the other from way back. Each one's heart almost blurted out what their minds stopped them from saying of the love they had for each other.
So Ron's foray in Omaha led to a delayed championship? Yeah, his nose knows Mrs. Dr. P's brainloaf, down to the most basic ingredients...
Quite the adventure he had with the contest, that lead to his Bueno Nacho fortunes and then this gift out of the blue. Nice of him to round up what should have rightly been his second mom's winning recipe. And he didn't do too badly himself either. Recognition of his entry, by default, his Naco creation (that Kim helped name), and all the touchstone moments crossed in this one.
Getting his due, and his girl, Ron's future is a bright one. With his best friend by his side.
| Cylon One chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
Another complete, and also another great.
These back-then adventures of Ron's are just too cool.
| Kwebs chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
Nice end to this story. I look forward to what ever comes next.
| screaming phoenix chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
Using Jim and Tim to figure out the ingredients for Ron to use was brillant! About time those two walking disasters did something useful for a change.
Naked Mole Rats pets of the future!
That was sweet with Kim and the kiss for luck(foreshadowing of the future perhaps?) and with a typo a legand is born.
I'm suprised Kim went into J.P. Berrymores for any reason, she hates that place. (Burnt pizza smell and all)
Nice ending Samurai way to finish up the tale.
| Captain IT chapter 4 . 5/31/2008
Wonderful story all around. Good work Samurai
Keep it KP real
| kaiokken chapter 3 . 5/28/2008
I've really been out of the loop for a while. It's been a while S.C...
As always, your tales are thrilling to read and always enjoyable...
Good story. Going to favorites...
| Captain IT chapter 3 . 5/24/2008
I think you finally caught the escense of corporate america.A now a word from our fashion designs.
Keep it KP real
| Mengsk chapter 3 . 5/23/2008
A third chapter? That was unexpected. I take it you're enjoying this cooking plot.