|Reviews for Final Gift|
| Victory-Starr chapter 1 . 5/7/2008
This was a nice story. I really enjoyed reading it. You did a great job at painting pictures of what everything looked like and I think that the Long's place sounds lovely. A couple being separated by death after so long together is definitely not easy, so I'm very glad that the angels could be there for them.
I did find one thing:
“Evenings where spent sitting in the large living room,”
That should be 'were' instead of 'where'.
Anyhow, it was a good story and I also appreciated being able to read a story here that did not involve any romance between the angels. You gave us a beautifully told, classic TBAA tale. Thank you for that. I hope you write some more stories soon!