adding this to my favs

This is an intriguing story and I'm looking forward to more.

OMG~ i really cant believe the end and the preview~

please please please update soon~

love always

hisanachan

hmm really interesting~

please update soon~

love always

hisanachan

finally got around to reading chapters 3 and 4! the villains are indeed intriguing, i like how they have roman first names and irish last names :P [well, the o'briens at least].

i also like how lily and scorpius have differing POVs, and that it's scorp who thinks deadly force should never be used. i hope lily comes around to this POV soon! i wanna see some romance between them, heh. keep up the good work.

Awesome story! keep it up

I like the story so far, update soon please!

Wow, Harry really can't catch a break, can he?

Great story-I love the Lily/Scorpius interactions, and it's great the the Ekklesia actually seem to have a tangible history. I can't wait to read more!

it's a really good story. very sad, ginny and harry dead :(

dazzledduo

Why couldn't you write a Rose/Scorpius story?They suit each other in a much better way.(as Harry and Hermione is the better pairing. Pity JKR didn't think so)

i like the way this is progressing! i'm also happy you resolved lily's misunderstanding with scorpius within this chapter, it means the story/investigation into her memory can proceed in the next chapter :D

also, this albus is neat. too many authors portray albus as mellow/reasonable/etc, so it's nice to see that he has his daddy's habit of jumping to certain conclusions :P good luck with your massive essay and update as soon as you can!

i didn't realise you'd posted the first chapter! it's as intriguing as that short excerpt you posted earlier promised ;) i find it strange that lily wouldn't tell anyone she saw something - wouldn't it have helped the chances of finding the culprits? but then again, i know it would be a HUGE psychological shock and ppl react differently. also, it would be nice to see scorpius and her relationship progress at a slower speed, b/c it wouldn't be as realistic otherwise. he's a slytherin after all - not some bleeding heart gryffindor ;)

at any rate, great first chapter! i'm looking forward to the following chapters so update soon!

Hey! I really like it, I think that you've made a really good start. Poor Lily though, it would be so awful for something like that to happen! Please update as soon as you can.

gopha-gurl

OMG! this story is heaps good. (It's Bormann btw) and i'm not just saying that. lol. Well update SOON! i have to go and do Ancient work now. NO!