Reviews for Harry's Bond Part 1
Guest chapter 1 . 12/28/2017
madie080802 chapter 13 . 9/28/2017
This was a joy to read. It was fast-paced without the feeling of dragging the reader by the proverbial ears.

Congrats On a great job.


ThunderSphinx chapter 3 . 8/24/2017
Dumbledore and McGonagall are both idiots. If progressing through the bond quickly is dangerous then Harry and Hermione both need access to the Soul Bond books!

This is all about trying to manipulate and control them. After all, Dumbledork can't allowchis primary weapon to be married; he would lose control over him! What an A-Hole
CaptainSea chapter 3 . 4/12/2017
Have their group nickname be 'the gryffinfour'
babiluv22 chapter 13 . 3/17/2017
I likes. On to the next
Guest chapter 3 . 1/29/2017
Totally backwards thinking, they need information to do so safely
noylj chapter 8 . 3/22/2016
As dentists, can they legally NOT report the Dursleys?
Unknown9501 chapter 13 . 12/28/2015
please write more this was good
DragonMistressOfRedemption888 chapter 11 . 9/12/2015
You forgot Lumos Solem. Sunlight Charm.
juan chapter 1 . 5/21/2015
too bad you quit this series
noylj chapter 10 . 2/9/2015
I would just follow McG's command and let her learn what refusing to listen can lead to. It isn't MY job to save the stone the some senile idiot brought into a school.
Too bad they aren't thinking any better than they did in canon. Telling Bumbles about the dragon would have seen it gone and Hagrid would only get a "disappointed" look from the meddler.
noylj chapter 9 . 2/9/2015
Does McG give them a chance to explain or just start punishing?
She was a useless Head of House and not a very good Deputy.
noylj chapter 7 . 1/7/2015
So, you emphasize the fact that Bumbles
1) knows that Harry has been to the mirror several times-thus implying that Bumbles monitors everything Harry does and probably has a tracking charm on Harry or the cloak
2) Is more than willing to leave an object in a school full of children that has caused people to waste away or gone mad and that, now that Harry KNOWS the mirror, he will FINALLY move the mirror.

And how the hell does Bumbles know what Harry is seeing in the mirror? Harry didn't tell him. Has he been there every time and listened in? Harry has no privacy buy an old manipulative gay guy who watches his every move apparently.
So, is your version of Bumbles the same saint as in canon or the same evil bastard I read about in canon?
firebolthallow1572 chapter 5 . 12/13/2014
Do have own thoughts instead of copying the book word for word it not right. The plot is good but the copying not something that should happen.
partiallykritikal chapter 1 . 10/9/2014
Friedrich Nietzsche: Philospher, late 19th and early 20th centuries. Creator of the idea of the ubermensch. Often accredited as the father of Nazism. His works largely influenced Hitler. Not a good person to quote in a fanfic.
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