Reviews for Ribbons Undone
lennypep chapter 13 . 4/25/2009
Good chapter, I hope that you are able to update soon :o)
Oldlibrn chapter 13 . 2/25/2009
I was waiting for Adria to rear her ugly head.

Thanks for updating. Now that we've met Adria can Qutesh [sp?] be far behind?
HAZMOT chapter 13 . 2/24/2009
I'm so glad this is back up. Jacek really could be heartless without knowing it. Poor Vala is shot during her fathers scams and it nearly kills her. Then he marries a woman that could care less about Jacek or her and now Vala is left with the memories of her mother and home to some stranger called Adria. To put a cherry on top, he forgets it's Vala's thirteenth birthday and leaves her all alone. The ribbon is so symbolic of what her life has become, lost. Now Vala as such a young age has to contend with a women who has no love for her and abandoned. It's no wonder Vala's life has been nothing but escaping and finding love where ever she could find it. :D
1477166 chapter 13 . 2/24/2009
Aww! Poor Vala! Adria really is a witch. And Jacek... forgetting her birthday? That sucks. I can see he has good intentions though, so that's ok... (:

Poor poor poor Vala.
Eternal Density chapter 13 . 2/24/2009
great chapter!

I feel like introducing Jacek to a pitchfork. not that it would help :(
Zentris chapter 12 . 2/12/2009
I do hope you continue this story. I've loved what you've done so far.
starjems88 chapter 12 . 11/17/2008
can't wait for more:)
HAZMOT chapter 12 . 11/10/2008
I'm so glad you're back. It seems that Jacek was rather irresponsible as far as taking care of Vala as a girl. No wonder she had to survive all those early years alone. The way Vala tells the story is almost to said for her to repeat at how Jacek was basically an unfit father all the time. It sounds like one his schemes caught up with him and Vala was hurt in the process. :D
acer-sigma chapter 12 . 11/9/2008
Get the feeling that if Jacek ever shows up again, he better watch out for Daniel.

At least Daniel now has a very good idea as to how Vala got caught up on the wrong side of the tracks. And it makes perfect sense for Vala to go into the crime game, when that was all that her father ever taught her.

And Vala getting injured in the end there, makes me wonder if Jacek will smarten up a bit. Might also be the reason why he eventually married Adria.
1477166 chapter 12 . 11/9/2008
Awwts. Vala having to stick up for her daddy. Tsk tsk. She was pretty smart. xD

Thanks for the update! (:
Oldlibrn chapter 12 . 11/9/2008
You obviously got it to work! I/m enjoying the background on Vala's childhood. It makes sense that she'd turn to crime later since that was the only training she'd had. Actually it was probably nor such a bad thing to have some sort of skill set, the other opportunities available to Vala probabaly would have been somewhat nasty.

Please update soon, I'm enjoying your story.
macisgate chapter 12 . 11/9/2008
Awesome, gripping chapter! Excellent.
Eternal Density chapter 12 . 11/9/2008

exciting chapter. Poor Vala.
E. Nagrom chapter 11 . 10/6/2008
yay Vala to the rescue of Jacek... hope its not the only time

E. Nagrom chapter 10 . 10/6/2008
sorry i haven't read this... lost the computer with the net LOL

This is a sad chapter...poor Vala :( can imagine the look the nun gave Jacek

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