|Reviews for Lost Clown|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/19
awesome prologe man just fucking awesome *grin,smirk* *giggle*... *yes i am a girl if ur questioning the giggle... just one that curses and dresses like a boy*
| akira walker chapter 12 . 10/27/2012
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/6/2012
If you don't want people to read this, you should really take it down... Just saying.
| Cet'lux chapter 12 . 5/4/2012
| TheLeftPhalangy chapter 5 . 1/28/2012
I SEE WHAT YOU DID THERE.
| Fiona chapter 12 . 10/6/2011
You need to change your summary! While I'll admit the start isn't the most well written I've read, this is a good story! I almost didn't read it because of the summary, but am entirely glad that I did! So thank you for writing such an enjoyable story. :)
| hollieobygollie chapter 12 . 7/3/2011
Okay, this may be weird, but I had a dream that I was eating chips and reading a fanfic...I jsut had a deja vu moment...Heheh! Even in my dreams, I'm reading you're amazing Fanfictions.
| hollieobygollie chapter 12 . 5/12/2011
"...hornier than a jackrabbit in spring!"
Wow...I'm surprised at how well that describes more than half the guys i know (especially a certain 7th grader).
| thatonegirl chapter 12 . 4/3/2011
i read all of them and i love it! make sure to write more stories in this general area! you write GOOD smut!
| ark gabriel chapter 12 . 1/9/2011
Hehe smut ;P any ways this is a good story yay allenXlavi :D
| Lonlyness chapter 12 . 12/12/2010
aww its almost too sad that its the end of the story;( hopefully youll wrigh some more.
| Bubblegumhairedmonster chapter 12 . 7/1/2010
TISSUES! I NEED TISSUES!
"Not even idiots are alone in this world."
| Josie Audriguez chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
dun worry Lavi ur not the only person who stays up late and reads!
it's like...10:30 and I'm barely beginning to read this x33
| aoiyumekou48 chapter 1 . 5/2/2010
This story is pretty interesting!
| Redkenja chapter 2 . 4/1/2010
Don't let your author's opening and closing words be more than what you wrote in the chapter- truthfully, no one really reads those nor do readers care for them. Often times they can be misleading as to how big a story is or how long a chapter is and that can be disappointing to an excited reader. Also, be careful. There are a few sentences where you keep tacking on more words with the use of commas. If you look at the scene where Lavi remembers when the mission what given, there are a few sentences that should have periods where the commas are. Don't worry about how long or short your sentences or paragraphs are. The more you write, the better your writing gets and your writing judgment as well. Also, make sure, that after you write you chapter, you step away from it, and come back to it at least an hour later to make sure it is what you want and to fix any mistakes that you may have. When you do that, you will find that you are going to add more to your chapter and fix things that you and your computer didn't catch. No matter how good a writer you are or how new or old your computer/computer programs are, you won't get everything right the first time. That, and if the mistake isn't a miss spelt word or glaringly wrong, you computer won't catch it either.