|Reviews for Scarring|
| Guest chapter 1 . 3/1/2015
Que siga que siga
| flying pancakes chapter 1 . 1/22/2015
I'm laughing so hard right now; this is awesome :D
| NoLifeQueen0981 chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
This made me laugh so much. Really funny. Poor Hikari.
| LostFairyMantic chapter 1 . 6/8/2013
BWA HA HA OH GOD MY STOMCH OH GOD! XD
| becauseimstupid chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
The only thing u could say to this story is... LOL LOL!
| xotennisloverxo chapter 1 . 8/26/2011
I gave to commend you for making such a comical centered one-shot - it was different and adorable. I will have to take note though that I shall never catch a Bibarel nor twirl….that was mortifying yet somehow immensely amusing to see Paul do. We all know that deep down Paul secretly wants to be Ash….. XD The thing that could have better furthered this story is a more fluid variation between dialogue and prose to help stimulate their reactions. I believe the reader would have gained a more likeability with such a mechanism.
| I Like Writing Romance chapter 1 . 7/15/2011
I started laughing out loud, and everyone's looking at me like "what the hell?"
| writlings chapter 1 . 6/19/2011
hahahahaha...Shinji and Torterra! hahaha! epic story! XDDDDDD
| pyr0technic chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
XDDDD GAAHHH imagining that in my head makes me laugh so hard XD
| Fiona chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
AHAHA! That was awesome! I can just picture Paul (Shinji) Twirling and acting like Ash (Satoshi)
| FluffyJazz96 chapter 1 . 9/13/2010
I've read this story before, but decided to leave a review anyway. xD
| TheEeveeTamer chapter 1 . 8/21/2010
LOL! I can totally picture that! *Twirling* YAY I JUST CAUGHT A BIBARIL!
Me: Mentally scarred.
Hikari: I AM NOW MENTALLY SCARRED
Me: Got that right girl!
Shinji: *Frolicking in flowers with torterra.*
Hikari and me: OKAY THAT IS JUST FREAKING CREEPY!
LOL! Swear I almost died!
| HanaIchi Ikari chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Man, that was EPIC! The twirling Satoshi did made me fall of my chair laughing! xD
| Miss Moo-moo Pettle Pot chapter 1 . 5/18/2010
that was brilliant. really.
"HEY, HIKARI. DERP DERP DERPITY DERP"
"DO NOT WANT. EVER"
| grovylegirl26 chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
i can not imagine shinji doing that! i laughed for five minutes! no kidding! btw, awesome story!