|Reviews for Negligence|
| cartchica89 chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Amazing chapter! You've really done a great job with Frank, he's so incredibly creepy and perverted that it's hard to think of him as human. I felt so bad for Sammy when he woke up all alone and saw Frank standing outside, that had to be terrifing. Then when Dean had his arms wrapped around him and Sam was sobbing out of fear and grief... excellent. I can't wait till Frank has to endure justice - Winchester style! I hope John and Pastor Jim come back quick as it kind of looks like Dean might be out of commsission although knowing the kind of danger that his brother is in who knows? Also you said this story is almost done, now I'm sad. I really like it! Please update soon! :)
| Enkidu07 chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
OH MY GOD. I did not see that last little bit coming. I was prepared for a nice snuggly ending here. I am at a loss. I don't even know what to say. Looking forward to the update!
| xxxxxlolliexxxxx chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
oh my god!
what a cliffy!
| BlueEyedDemonLiz chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Oh this has been such a delicious limp Sam story that I'll be sincerely sad to see it end in a chapter or two but I know you can't drag things on forever - although I could quite happily devour more of this. Frank is such a fantastic SOB and it's interesting to have a non-supernatural predator that seems to outshine all the horrors the brothers have faced before as the nastiest of them all.
Anyway I can’t wait to find out what is going to happen to Sam next, I have a feeling Frank might not quite have finished with Sam yet. Which is terrible for young Sammy but simply awesome for sicko limp Sam fans like me lol : D
Well done with this brilliant story. Liz x
| sairah chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
I can't believe you left it there!
That was an evil cliffhanger. Another fantastic chapter full of genuine tension. Look forward to more.
| darksupernatural chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Evil cliffie alert! Jeez, the things you do to us! It's no wonder you have the number of reviews you do! My god, now Dean's been stabbed and Sam's nearly in the hands of the fat baddie again! Why? Why can't they catch a break? Please update soon. I'm tying to breathe here!
| irishgirl9 chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Such sad chapter. Poor Sam, its heartbreaking that he thinks he's been left again. As for Dean all I can say is OH MY GOD! I hope Jim and John can stop that bastrd before he gets Sam again. Please update as soon as humanly possible!
| gidgetgal9 chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Girlfriend what an evil cliffie- but as long as you update soon- I forgive you! What and intense chapter- great job!
| A lost lily chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
This chapter was fantastic, and I swear this story just keeps getting better and better. I love that Dean was the one who stayed with Sam while the others went to look for the one that hurt him, and I love Dean standing between Frank and Sammy. I am biting my nails eagerly awaiting the next chapter!
| KatieLB chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
omg! you didn't just do that ? LOL another great intense chapter... at least Sam knows that Dean didnt leave him and he was there for him... well before he was stabbed .. argh update quickly please
| supernaturaldh chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Girl- that is too funny. I laughed and laughed "You played around and made a mess!" Of course you didn't but I still loved the humor of that statement.
The story rocked, and now Dean is hurt...ow...loving it.
| sayrae3times chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Oh! So scary! I need more! Is Dean all right? Will Frank get Sammy? Oh, the torture! I love it and hate it all at the same time! That's an excellent writer for ya!
| Still Awesome2009 chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Okay, Frank, is officially on my naughty list. great chapter
| moogsthewriter chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Hohohohohoho... you are evil! :) Although I already knew that from previous cliffies... but they just keep getting worse. Sure hope John and Jim come running into the rescue right... about... now!
...Guess I'll just have to wait for *you* to make the update. :) Great work!
| JuliaAurelia chapter 11 . 6/9/2008
Uh-oh! I hope it is Dean who has done the stabbing, not Frank!
Continue to love Pastor Jim's dressing down of John. I think John is finally starting to realize just how much he has "dropped the ball" on poor Sammy.