Reviews for Negligence
Guest chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
incredibly dark, but it was a thrilling read. kind of wish that it has a happier ending... nonetheless, awesome story :D
jk stevens chapter 2 . 5/25/2012
Whoa..I hope Dean and John get there in time...talk about a cliffhanger..
jk stevens chapter 1 . 5/25/2012
Poor little Sammy...*pats his head.*
Iniysa chapter 12 . 5/1/2012
Great story. Thanks for writing it.

Lauren
ashtyn2188 chapter 12 . 2/12/2012
i hope you make more supernatural stories, just less perverted :) i love stories about sam, so keep up on the good work! :)
Junkerin chapter 10 . 1/17/2012
Seems like you have given up writing on FF. What a shame. This story is very good. A little bit fast in the end but I realy had a great time reading it. Thank you
koalablanc chapter 12 . 1/17/2012
This is a really well written story. You're very talented. The childhood you described for them feels so real and true. You didn't end it with a chickflick moment and it set the stones for the future, for when Sam will finally stop trying to fit and leave for college. Thank you for your hard work. I'm going to check all your others stories now
lex287 chapter 12 . 12/5/2011
Stayed up way too late to finish this, but it was so worth it! just the right length, and i've been a fan of supernaturaldh for basically as long as i've been reading fanfic, so just had to check out the beta she kept talking about :) Looking forward to reading more of your amazing stuff! xx
spnMom chapter 3 . 10/6/2011
Whew, narrow escape... yay!
spnMom chapter 2 . 10/6/2011
This must have been really difficult to write, because it is difficult to read. Love it, the tension is thick and my skin is kind of crawling. Great descriptive writing; it is almost too good because it is kind of creeping me out.
spnMom chapter 1 . 10/6/2011
I've read this story before, but apparently I missed commenting on the first chapter. I really love this fic and this first chapter is so harsh... Kids at home alone with no money is just sad and scary; it makes me want to read more. Great start. Thanks!
CharmingKarma chapter 12 . 5/23/2011
D: *cries* This was so sad and poor Sam and Poor Dean and John can go Dine with a Wendigo! This was super well written and thanks for writing! Sorry for cutting this short, but I'm supposed to be doing homework...T_T Saaaammmmyyyyyy...*sniffles* Poor little boys...
Avaerial chapter 12 . 4/23/2011
Very lovely! You have such a way with words! It blows me away!

This story was very well composed and very moving. You wrote of the Winchester's emotions perfectly! I liked the setting of this story. I liked how it rook place in their childhood prior to modern days. Very intriguing toss and turn of events. Rom the times where you wanted to cry or to the times you wanted to scream, this is a beautiful story. I loved it! Thank you for composing it and sending it our way!

Great job and keep on writing!
Underworld's-Reject chapter 12 . 4/22/2011
Really good story, very well done. Poor Sammy.
Underworld's-Reject chapter 4 . 4/21/2011
Just read the first four chapters. Very good. Look forward to reading the rest tomorrow
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